I appreciate the advice from both of you and think it is sound, but to bobpursley, I must say this(and I apologize if it comes across as disrespectful): I know what I want to do, and I know that college is for learning. But I also know that it is easy to be sucked into the ...
April 22, 2012
poetry, please comment
I love it. Its got a great theme. The rhyme scheme isn't bad. Each person's speech has their own unique rhythm. I like your work; this one and the other one you did (Still So New To You). Your poetry has a certain feel to it. It's almost musical. I look forward to ...
March 28, 2012