Tuesday
May 21, 2013

Posts by Shawna


Total # Posts: 134

Writing Paragraphs and sentences
Paragraph 2 good copy... Revised and corrected. Anna, I am so happy you’ve moved back to Burlington from Bay view, Ohio! Especially since there are many more job oppurtunities here considering it’s a bigger city. In fact just yesterday I was talking with my boss at M...

writing sentences and paragraphs
Revised Paragraph 2 Let me know if this is better: Anna, I am so happy you’ve moved back to Burlington from Bay view, Ohio! Especially since there are many more job oppurtunities here for you to discover. In fact just yesterday I was talking with my boss at Metropolitan M...

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs
Thank you done :)

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs
Here is my Paragraph 1 , It is my good copy just wanna a final check before I submit it. PARAGRAPH 1 According to the job listing in The Daily News, I understand you are seeking a Medical Administrative Assistant to work in Fletcher Allen Hospital in Burlington, Vermont. This ...

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs Paragraph 2
I have problems with fragments and wordiness hehehe :) but with all your help my other paragraph turned out well and I will work some more tomorrow on this one. THanks so much I hope people on here appreciate your critique cause I've already learnt alot and you've made...

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs Paragraph 2
ASSIGNMENT: Your favorite cousin has moved to your town and is looking for a job. Her previous experiences are working as a cashier and sales clerk at two department stores. You know she plans to apply at similar stores in your town. But you also know she is a perfect match fo...

Writting Sentences and Paragraphs
Your right , I just assumed it needed the description. I know I have to revise now for proper use of comma's and such . Is the use for a semi colon even needed in there as well? I also have to have 8-12 sentences in the paragraph so is the 9 I have enough? I can't subm...

Writting Sentences and Paragraphs
Background You’ve applied for a specific job in your field of study. The Human Resources Department arranges an interview and tells you to bring with you a polished piece of writing for them to evaluate your writing skills. The paragraph must describe one particular expe...

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs
My Corrected Paragraph: In response to your job listing in my local newspaper, I understand you are seeking a Medical Administrative Assistant, to work in Fletcher Allen Hospital located in Burlington, Vermont. I understand in this required position, you must have the ability ...

Writing Sentences and Paragraphs
My Corrected Paragraph: In response to your job listing in my local newspaper, I understand you are seeking a Medical Administrative Assistant, to work in Fletcher Allen Hospital located in Burlington, Vermont. I understand in this required position, you must have the ability ...

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