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English - ms. sue
that the parents could do better raising children
April 24, 2012

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for glass castle memoir i finally get assignment ms. sue i write persuasive essay, b/w deduction and induction i think deduction be easy cause i only hve to support my main points. i need to do it on dad. i not know what topic to do it on, and how to start. basically parents ...
April 24, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 22, 2012

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yes i do, so i say the leaves draw energy from their surroundings, i not know what else to say to make sentence longer
April 22, 2012

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ms. sue i also want to say this about leaves that they draw energy from their surroundings but how i make that relate with me?
April 22, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 22, 2012

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i be also able to say that i beleive in the hope of my roots to keep me complete and keep me going on in positive direction?
April 22, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :)
April 22, 2012

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i say i beleive in hope to grow into light?
April 22, 2012

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ms. sue for my metaphor, i write one line that say trees losing leaves lead to new growth of them, so i not let myself get disappointed if a write something poorly i believe in hope... i not know what add after hope.
April 22, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 22, 2012

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ms. sue this be ending part of my description writer paragraph, you please tell me if it be good, also what be last thing i say to conclude it well? I go through a lot of obstacles in my writing, but I’m always guided the right way. I like being in a quiet area, outside ...
April 22, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 22, 2012

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ms. sue i have to write two paragraphs one in which i just say what type writer i be and the other one be explaining what type metaphor i be. for paragraph which tell what type writer i be, i hve little bit stuff i add, but i not know what else to say about me as writer? u ...
April 22, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 19, 2012

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i still be working on metaphor assignment for the fruits, i write that if tree bear fruits that represents achievement/success for writing ive written. do that make any sense?
April 19, 2012

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thanks soo much ms. sue :)
April 19, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :) Author utilizes strategies of organization throughout her argumentation. Tell how she use comparison/contrast in paragraphs 2-7, tell also how she use cause & effect in paragraph 8-9. She tell about beauty of land before but corporate destroy its ...
April 19, 2012

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her intro be really long,ur sentences be this long? why/why not? why hers be this long? why it work? mine not be this long because i not able to grasp enough breath to read it. she have commas everywhere that why it work?
April 19, 2012

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After setting us up with a full intro to her issue, the author has her thesis statement in the 7th paragraph. “what nobody is saying is that along with the human tragedies... tell how this statement also acts like a transition between parts of essay.
April 19, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :) till then i be posting the questions
April 19, 2012

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ms. sue you please help me with story questions? if you have time then this be story Field of Broken Dreams by Sharon Butala My memories of drives in the country when I was a child in the 1940s and early 1950s, after the devastation of the 1930s, are of abandoned farmstead ...
April 19, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i also do it in paragraph and if i not like then i try it in poem :)
April 16, 2012

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you think it be easier if it in form of poem or paragraph?
April 16, 2012

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Wow ms. sue i really really love the tree one =D thanks very much i try to do justice with metaphor u give me :)
April 16, 2012

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and thanks ms. sue, i wait :)
April 16, 2012

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the assignment i have be that i hve to tell others about myself as writer. i need to build extended metaphor and tell other what i be like as writer. the metaphor chosen in form of animal, machine, or something else. any metaphor be correct if it support my assertion.
April 16, 2012

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i hve to do metaphor assignment where i tell which type of writer i be. i not know what metaphor to use some example be spider: I am a writer: I am a spider, spinning a web of meaning with words and images pulled from my soul. I display my beautiful and fragile work to the ...
April 16, 2012

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thanks ms. sue i use that
April 11, 2012

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ms. sue what i name this process analysis essay? i not want to say how to stay healthy in winter.
April 11, 2012

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thanks ms. sue:)
April 11, 2012

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thank you very much ms. sue :) u please send me link to one really good directional essay that i read and get better idea to write mine?
April 11, 2012

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thanks ms. sue but this be a directional process analysis essay so i be able to add that intro still?
April 11, 2012

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i writing a process analysis essay on topic staying healthy in winter and i making it a directional type of process analysis essay because it be easy to direct people on how to do things. the only points i get for staying healthy in winter be wearing warm clothing, covering ...
April 11, 2012

How get caramel in caramilk bar
thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 5, 2012

How get caramel in caramilk bar
thank you very much ms. sue so they use shell moulding plant. any way to make procedure short to how they add it in there?
April 5, 2012

How get caramel in caramilk bar
my sister have this question for biology how they get caramel into caramilk bar? she think the inject it in there, but she want to know how they do it.
April 5, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 5, 2012

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i need to fix this sentence "Stop or I'll block you!" the boy yelled. I replace block with deter instead because it be stronger word but teacher say that it not tell her anything but that i just read the definition of deter. i not get what she mean by this.
April 5, 2012

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thank you very much ms. sue :)
April 5, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :) i have these ones in story he say " that will gluten you, good and solid." What consequence do author’s strange use of “gluten” hve? i not get this one when author use "bacilli" as insects to swat or as favorite dog run over...
April 5, 2012

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how jiggin story be organized?you be shocked when he die? that be by what he do daily? yeah i be shocked because he be really healthy.
April 5, 2012

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in story he say " that will gluten you, good and solid." What consequence do author’s strange use of “gluten” hve? i not get this one when author use "bacilli" as insects to swat or as favorite dog run over by car, this be known as comic ...
April 5, 2012

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the author write "eat" lot of times in one paragraph. The repetition be unintentional? What effect it have? In what other section in story do he exploit repition? i not get this one.
April 5, 2012

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what else be hint?
April 5, 2012

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it ask what be hint that author’s process analysis be meant more to amuse than to teach? That be because he over exaggerate?
April 5, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 5, 2012

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i need help with questions of this story please How to Live to Be 200 by Stephen Leacock Twenty years ago I knew a man called Jiggins, who had the Health Habit. He used to take a cold plunge every morning. He said it opened his pores. After it he took a hot sponge. He said it ...
April 5, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 5, 2012

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for my compare contrast essay i not know how to add hook in introduction i start out like this The short story, " the yellow wallpaper, by gilman and the movie 'a bea utiful mind directed by ron howard be successful in portraying people with mental illnesses.
April 5, 2012

ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :D hve a good night!
April 4, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :) ms. sue for one part i write this The two main characters battle with their minds to get their sanity back. but this not real make sense because the character in story not even try to realize that she be having delusions. and john realize in very ...
April 4, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :) ms. sue i only need help with my thesis statement now, i hve to mention these strong points in it, that john nash hve freedom in film when the character in story dont. she be isolated and her husband not let her go out do what she wished. john nash ...
April 4, 2012

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thanks ms. sue and yeah that be right he saw his friend, parcher person he worked for, and his friend's niece that did not exist. you please fix this sentence also Although John Nash starts to learn hw to distinuish between what is real and what is not. And begins to ...
April 4, 2012

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ms. sue for my essay teacher say i have to give example when i say for movie a beautiful mind when john start interacting with delusions, this effects his job and relationships. what example i put here? you please make my below sentence proper and tell if it be good example? ...
April 4, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue i like that one :D
April 4, 2012

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ms. sue you watch movie a beautiful mind? i tell you yesterday that i be writing a compare contrast essay of this movie with the yellow wallpaper story. i not know what to title this? i want to be cool, one person name their unbalanced. you have suggest what i name mine?
April 4, 2012

Art - Evaluation
thanks very much ms. sue :)
April 4, 2012

Art - Evaluation
thank you ms. sue what else i say about underwater life?
April 4, 2012

Art - Evaluation
for Art i draw a fish, and i have to say what it mean. i write that i try to send out message to protect sea life, but i not know why? it be too hard to describe, i just say that these sea creatures be just like us, wanting hygiene, hving good habitat, being healthy. i not ...
April 4, 2012

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thanks ms. sue i hve word delusions in my essay a lot there be other words for delusions?
April 3, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :) the original sentence which be part of my thesis be.. .. it's a ride to a new world through their thoughts, feelings, and opinions. ^ that make sense? i telling about characters that have mental illnesses which be character from movie a beautiful mind and...
April 3, 2012

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what be better word for (and how they see things) any stronger word i use to replace this?
April 3, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :)
April 3, 2012

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thank you very much ms. sue :) i comparing this with beautiful mind movie. and i write this sentence but it not make sense teacher say. ...both slowly got worse, and were in a conflict with their minds.
April 3, 2012

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i doing compare contrast essay and for the short story The yellow wallpaper it be that her condition get worse as her interest in wallpaper deepens. it not get better right?
April 3, 2012

ms. sue
thank you very much ms. sue for helping me :)
April 3, 2012

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it ask What be total effect of images in paragraph 4? for this it be that it give picture of winter in prairies. also these be the other characteristics of her hometown and nation that they not be cruel it have Beautiful nature, oddities of place be endless?
April 3, 2012

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thank you very much ms. sue :) it ask what important role do paragraphs 12-14 play in classifying the argument? It tell to respect your land and not call it dull?
April 3, 2012

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thank you ms. sue :) ms. sue yesterday you say that author compare her town to nation as whole, that be because she tell about oddities?
April 3, 2012

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other characteristics be of her hometown and nation that they not be cruel it have Beautiful nature, oddities of place be endless. paragraph 4 be personification when it personify the moccasins. there be any similes? alliterations? i have my other questions above
April 3, 2012

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What be total effect of images in paragraph 4? I not get what this means, it just tell about surroundings. There is figure of speech in paragraph 3 “sea of land” and in paragraph 4 the prairie becomes “white dazzling deserts” what be five other figures of ...
April 3, 2012

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what important role do paragraphs 12-14 play in classifying the argument? It tell to respect your land and not call it dull?
April 3, 2012

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ms. sue yesterday you say that author compare her town to nation as whole, that be because she tell about oddities? What be three characterisitics of her home town that she see later in her nation? Or even in world as whole? Refer to a passage to show each comparison. I not ...
April 3, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :) in paragraph 4 she tell about excitement she have riding horses. she tell about mocassins squeaking and slithering on the hard rutted snow of the roads.. she tell about adventure she have.
April 3, 2012

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ms. sue for story yesterday i hve these other questions why does author end with "eyes" because she experience everything with them? why does author begin with pair of opposites in paragraph 1? i not get this one what do the words "wodges, clonk, cannon forth ...
April 3, 2012

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thanks ms. sue these be only other questions left why does author end with "eyes" because she experience everything with them? why does author begin with pair of opposites in paragraph 1? what do the words "wodges, clonk, cannon forth hve effect? they just be ...
April 2, 2012

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i not really understand this story, she use really strong words. it also ask that she put her main point into thesis state, identify it. that be her life? it say do she mostly compare or contrast her prarie town to nation as whole?
April 2, 2012

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what organizational goals do main character achieve by repeating her titlle phrase in both opening and closing?
April 2, 2012

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okay this be the story Margaret Laurence - Where the world began A strange place it was, that place where the world began. A place of incredible happenings, splendours and revelations, despairs like multitudinous pits of isolated hells. A place of shadow-spookiness, inhabited ...
April 2, 2012

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ms. sue i read story you please help me with questions?
April 2, 2012

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oh thank you ms. sue :)
April 2, 2012

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what it mean when it say: i was reefing through a post
April 2, 2012

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thanks ms. sue :)
April 2, 2012

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ms. sue you know the story i write yesterday i not know what to name it, you know any cool names i give it?
April 2, 2012

ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue for helping :) you please able to delete that story post i not want any plagiarsing issue.
April 1, 2012

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ms. sue i reply to my english post sorry it almost on other page so i post this.
April 1, 2012

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thanks ms. sue i glad u like it but i not know what to put as solution to story, how to prove that it just be his imagination.
April 1, 2012

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Okay thank you very much ms sue :)
April 1, 2012

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i also want to make it 400 words, but i not know how i get to main point of story in just 400 words.
April 1, 2012

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^thank you :) Ms. sue here it be. Teacher says there have to be three switches of the illness going from better to worse or vice-versa. It has to be descriptive, in the present, compelling character, good use of vocab, powerful, monolouge/hook/dialouge, and creativity and ...
April 1, 2012

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Okay I post it on here in a few minutes.
April 1, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
March 28, 2012

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this be last question What figure of speech portrays the wharf’s ‘crooked legs stockinged in barncales”? where else do it occur? How do it further the description? I not get this one I think the figure of speech be personification but I not get where else it ...
March 28, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
March 28, 2012

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Emily plays with words she write slugs ‘slimed’ walk instead of just describe walk as ‘slimy’ find other words she use in fresh ways. I only find this one - - stinging nettles. I not get what other ones there be?
March 28, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue:) they be onomatophoiea words?
March 28, 2012

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What do Emily gain by using words such as “grated” ,“slithered” , “ooze”? She gain sound effects? Feelings?
March 28, 2012

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thanks very much ms. sue :)
March 28, 2012

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ms. sue i have little more questions on story i be posting one by one. Even though this author Emily be admired as writer, she be better well-known as painter. What aspects of her style remind u of the visual arts? Write down passages that illustrate ur answers. I get the ...
March 28, 2012

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