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July 29, 2014

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English - ms. sue
thanks ms. sue for reading story yesterday, i need help writing essay that be on Wat expense be paid by beings & by society 4 their unhesitating approval of tradition or brutal social rituals. Do there be rituals that have outlasted their initial usefulness or be retained 4 th...

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :) i have to write essay on Wat expense be paid by beings & by society 4 their unhesitating approval of tradition or brutal social rituals. Do there be rituals that have outlasted their initial usefulness or be retained 4 the wrong motives? for first p...

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thanks very much ms. sue :)

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ms. sue thanks for giving me list of traditions :) you read the story lottery by shirley jackson? i need help with story, i writing essay on traditions and i need to mention story parts.

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I trying to think of some rituals that still be practised today that be harmful, or should not be practiced. or like some that are practiced for wrong reasons. teacher gave us christmas one, and tell us that we forget the real meaning of christmas, and that it be stressful for...

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Thanks very very much ms. sue :)

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i just need help coming up with title :)

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i not able to come up with other example though, like some key point i put in my essay like this just be for senior people or for other people like difference of race, being neglected cause of colour of skin, status, and all? i be writing essay on t...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) the question be that how do this story be a reflection of society today? that people still be rude to elders?

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I read this story, I need help with some questions please by Katherine Mansfield Miss Brill Although it was so brilliantly fine - the blue sky powdered with gold and great spots of light like white wine splashed over the Jardins Publiques - Miss Brill was glad that she had dec...

English - ms. sue
happy meaning be happy where you are at.

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i mean is it possible to live a happy life in modern times.

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ms. sue i think this quote be really good “Whatever you decide, don't let it be because you don't think you have a choice.” you think so too?

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thanks ms. sue but do the crimes and stuff fall under falling under pressure of society? cause this essay sort of be on theme of the story of invitations as well.

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and i have to mention 3-4 reasons or examples providing examples from story and real life to support that it be possible to live happy life in todays times. for real example i think of being with family, friends -spiritual i not know what other three example i take, like maybe...

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i choose this quote “You can't make decisions based on fear and the possibility of what might happen.” i not know what to write after this quote, that introduce this theme though. i not get how to start. the quote is sort of tricky so i not really know what to wr...

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :)

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Thanks very much ms. sue :) and i not think she want us to use I. but for my introductory paragraph which be the first one, can i use like "Some people can feel contented or do i have to use just those plural pronouns? and change it to people around us may interfere with ...

English - ms. sue
ms. sue i writing an essay on : is it possible to live a peaceful/happy life in times of today? I going to write yes it be for this essay, but teacher say that write essay by saying WE, so what be other forms of that I use, I think she said dont use they, people, etc. Also I n...

English - ms. sue
oh that make sense, thanks very much ms. sue :)

English - ms. sue
I also not get what this quote mean "life imitates art" i dont think that have anything to do with story, it just be her feelings it have to do with.

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :) i also need help with this questions which be How do the book Mansfield park take symbolic importance in this story? The person who leave the book behind, in what way she have done it for a reason that be thoughtful, imperative, and specifically pro...

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :) what do it mean by when it say in relation to mood creation, what descriptive intention do such different serve? do that mean that the main character feeling happy at home, and not comfortable outside? also i not get the second part to that -- do th...

English - ms. sue
I also not get this question References 2 light appear significantly in the story. Tell the difference b/w the writer’s use of language that is suggestive of “bright” lights resulting into the reception of Thursday’s letter with the “muted” lights...

English - ms. sue
then expanded omniscience mean that author know what everyone be thinking? i still not able to understand, do the author actually change from limited omniscient to expanded omniscient? but we are not given other peoples thoughts, except maybe at the very end when they all look...

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i dont get what limited omniscient means that mean we dont know much about her right? i still not really get the question.

English - ms. sue
sorry ms. sue that other word not appear, it be in messed up letters, but it supposed to be c o c k t a i l parties

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Ms. Sue, my sister write out story here it is. On Monday she looked in her mailbox, although she had no reason to expect a letter so soon. But there it was, a small, square car. She held it in her two hands, testing its weight. It was an invitation to an exhibition of drawings...

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Thanks very very much ms. sue :) i appreciate your help :)

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I need help on this story it be called Invitations by Carol Shields, I not able to post story on here but if you go to google and type in search box : invitations by carol shields on monday she looked in her mailbox a books google search come up that be the first one, and this...

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :)

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ms. sue i want to be clear on two more questions. about this man sitting on the step with suitcase, that be because he be leaving somewhere, but i not get why he be mentioned? to escape from bad neighbourhood? also i not get what recrimination mean. to describe their marriage ...

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Thanks very very much ms. sue :D

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thanks very much ms. sue :) also I not get this Ahead, there is a small store with windows covered in hand painted signs and vertical metal bars. On the edge of the light, three young men and a girl slouch. One of them has a beard and, in spite of the advancing darkness, wears...

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thanks very much ms sue :) I also not get in what sense protagonist is on stage. and in this para In spite of his car, he hopes his day old beard which he strokes upward with the heel of his hand, will, when combined with his clothes, provide immunity. He slips his wallet into...

English - ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :) it be good choice because you get to experience the mans emotions in this tense better?

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thanks ms. sue for help with questions witht that story but i still need some help with few questions. it ask why the story be written in present tense? and is it good choice made by writer?

English - ms. sue
ms. sue in morning you plase take a look at my old post? yesterday?

English - ms. sue
In spite of his car, he hopes his day old beard which he strokes upward with the heel of his hand, will, when combined with his clothes, provide immunity. He slips his wallet into his shirt pocket, does up the metal buttons on his jacket and slips a ten dollar bill into his ba...

English - ms. sue
in this para Faced with this, he decides to call the next time he sees a store or phone booth. So intent is he upon the future that he dangerously ignores the present and does not notice the police car, concealed in the shadows of a side street, nose out and follow him. how he...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) in this para Fences here are little more than fragments. Cars jam the narrow streets and he worries that he might strike the unkempt children who dart back and forth like startled fish. Street lights come on. He takes them as a signal to return the ...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) He passes a ten-foot wire fence enclosing a playground bare of equipment and pounded flat. The gate is double locked, the fence cut and rolled into a cone. Three boys throw stones at pigeons. Paper clogs the fence like drifted snow. The school is co...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i not get which words create mood in that paragraph? also in this para Their slick hair glistens as though shellacked. Their leather jackets gleam with studs. Eagles, tigers, wolves, and serpents ride their backs. what mood be made by the images in ...

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He does not hurry for he has no destination. He meanders, instead, through the neat suburban labyrinth of cul-de-sacs, bays and circles, losing and finding himself endlessly. Becoming lost is made all the easier because the houses repeat themselves with superficial variations....

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ms. sue i post question about story identities. i not get what it mean when it say what it mean to have identity? also the first word that story start with that be normally - why that word really signficant? because it tell that this not be some ordinary day? what neigbhourhoo...

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i need some help with qustions for this story Identities - W.D. Valgardson Normally, he goes clean-shaven into the world, but the promise of a Saturday liquid with sunshine draws him first from his study to the backyard, from there to his front lawn. The smell of burning leave...

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thanks very much ms. sue :)

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thanks very much ms. sue :) also I not understand this quote this is what father say to his son i think: "If I were God, I would have made the world just so and no different. And so I have you... I have you."

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well in movie they be fighting for survival, cause they do not have anything, but father sort of starts being bad, because if you need to survive, then you need to do everything you can to live. but still i not get what be ironic when he tell his son that they be good guys whe...

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ms. sue in the movie, the dad keep telling his son that they be the good guys. I not know what be ironic about this.

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Thanks very much ms. sue :)

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Do anyone read the story "the road" or watch the movie? i have some questions.

for Mohammad
thanks very much Writeacher :) and i already wrote story yesterday but not able to come with title still.

for Mohammad
thanks very much writeacher :) i do it when her child is at hospital at his last stage of cancer, and when her and her younger son go there, the heart monitor show a flat line meaning he be no more, and so she is so sunk in drake, that when they go to cross a street, she not n...

English ms. sue
should i make the lady already depressed and that her son has passed away, or that her son has not passed away yet? would it make sense if i made the lady already depressed?

English ms. sue
i having trouble with one thing, i not know whether to talk in present or past tense, and i dont know where to start story from, should i start when her child is still alive, or when he be dead and she be traumatized?

English ms. sue
ms. sue i writing narrative story on topic that every generation hve something valuble to give. that you learn from everyone. i thought of writing story on my cousin who pass away from cancer, and i going to write in third person and mention how that cancer totally traumatize ...

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Thanks very much ms. sue :) could it also be that he seeing them take responsibility for their own children?

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i just not understand the ending of the story, why the father be mad when son ask for a second coat? and then when he say its for his child, then he got happy. why did he go all happy?

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thanks very much ms sue :) so for thesis statement i say that both poem and story give two different ways of father giving their children affection? so father in poem and girl respectful of each other, the boys in short story not respectful of father?

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ms. sue if you have time to read, then this be story the gold mountain coat by judy fong bates 1 The small town that was my home was typical of many small towns in Ontario. It had one main street, one elementary school, one district high school, and five churches – Presby...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i doing contrast of this to this story. should i post story on here if you can read it? i writing essay and telling difference of relationships of father and children.

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I not real understand this poem Wordsmith by Susan Young In my mind I call my father the Pollyfilla king, watch with something akin to awe as he begins the arduous process of filling in the gaps, the long winded cracks that travel down the walls of my house like run on sentenc...

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thanks very much ms. sue :) i like that one :) and for thesis statement i mention the article and say author show how something so simple can be so much more useful than ?

English ms. sue
oh that make much sense,thanks ms sue :) also do that paragraph up above have any irony in it? because author be right in that but not what we expect. for thematic statement, it have to be a global statement that not mention specifics from the story, but generalizes accurately...

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also ms. sue about thematic statement? dont it have to be about irony? because i writing paragraph on irony? i have to write thematic and thesis statement.

English ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue:) i still need a little help with the irony part, like im kind of confused with irony. by being ironic the author mean opposite of what she say? there be no irony in this passage right? compared to a computer, a pencil takes up far less space on a desk...

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ms. sue for the article an ode to user friendly pencil i need to write thematic statement, but i not sure what to exactly say about it, cause its just about the author being ironic and making a point. also ms. sue do the title be ironic as well because odes be for heroes or im...

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thanks very much ms. sue :)

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what do the word anti-climactic mean?

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Thanks very much Ms. Sue :D

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does the 6th paragraph have irony? where she say getting pencils create employment and prosperity for people, cause that happen with computers? also in 4th paragraph, where she say pencil be more simple and direct, wouldnt that be with computer because computer have spellcheck...

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oh so she dont influence one to buy pencils?

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sorry this be other half 7 Of course, like most people I rarely buy a pencil, preferring to pick them up free from various places of employment, in the mistaken belief that they are a legitimate fringe benefit. It’s best not to make that assumption about office computers....

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i need help with english article, it say find irony, but i not get what irony be in here? i know there be three types of irony and this one be verbal irony which mean author of article mean to say opposite of what she means, but then do she not like pencils? or she do? i reall...

English ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :)

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thanks very much ms. sue so that mean holden want to stop thinking negative and step into adult world finally?

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ms. sue i still writing the compare and contrast essay. teacher say that holden be seeking closure, what do that mean?

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Thanks very much ms. sue :)

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thanks very much ms. sue. thesis and thematic statement are not the same r they? cause teacher said thematic statement be global statement. i write it like Life bring upon sadness or happiness through its experiences one faces...either have good effect or bad effect on one?

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i doing a compare/contrast essay on character h olden frm novel i read and hamlet. for my thematic statement, do i just talk about one theme or like a mixture of things they've gone through? also what i name this essay? something that fit both characters?

English- Hamlet
thanks very much Writeacher :)

English- Hamlet
I writing a character analysis on Hamlet and i just need few notes what be all his conflicts? he have one with his uncle who killed his dad, his mom. what be his flaws? his indecisions strengths? not stupid, impulsive state of mind? depressed attitudes and behaviours: crazy, d...

English- Hamlet
thanks very much Writeacher :)

English- Hamlet
I want to know what this line mean in hamlet: but break my heart for i must hold my tongue why do Hamlet not want to share his feelings with anyone?

English- Hamlet
Thanks very much ms. sue :)

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I got to explain this soliloquie in a paragraph: Spoken by Hamlet, Hamlet Act 1 Scene 2: O, that this too too solid flesh would melt Thaw and resolve itself into a dew! Or that the Everlasting had not fix’d His canon ‘gainst self-slaughter! O God! God! How weary, sta...

English- Hamlet
Thanks very much ms. sue for all your help, i really appreciate it :)

English- Hamlet
thanks very much ms. sue :) i need to do last one on depression/madness, this what i get,i not know if it is that good. Not all scars show, not all wounds heal. Pain changes one completely, bringing upon tears of misery, ferocious thoughts drowning them into deep darkness. A h...

English- Hamlet
Thanks very much Ms. Sue :) I do this one on supernatural theme, but i had troubles. Our perception can fool us to the extent that we start seeing things that don't exist, and start believing them to be real, and they become a part of our lives, taking control of some of o...

English- Hamlet
thanks very much ms. sue wow those be exactly what i was looking for thanks sooo very much, you mind helping me with other ones? :)

English- Hamlet
I trying to do thematic statement on certainty or uncertainty which be in play of hamlet, but i having troubles with last sentence. Being sure and timely in one’s own decisions will allow them to accomplish tasks and clear any obstacles within time. Doubts will lead to co...

English Hamlet
Thanks very much Writeacher that one be real good :)

English Hamlet
Writeacher i still sort of struggling with this one for Betrayal: Getting stabbed in the back by the ones we love and trust the most adds our hearts to flames with broken hearts no where to go.

English Hamlet
yes I be referring to Hamlet the main character.

English Hamlet
I writing global statements on themes in play hamlet, i trying to write one on betrayal, but its not turning out like i want it. Having loved and trusted those that mean the world to us and getting stabbed by them in the backs is the worst betrayal that one can come upon. also...

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thanks very much ms. sue for link :)

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Thanks a lot Writeacher, that give me some insight on these characters.

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I have to write an analysis of character in play hamlet by shakespeare. and tell what role be of this character. which character have lots of information on it? King Hamlet, Gertrude, Laertes, Horatio, Ophelia, Polonius, or Claudius. I wanted to do on Gertrude before, but i no...

English ms. sue
thanks very much ms. sue :) do the poem have irony?

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