The thesis statement is: Facebook should be limited by parents and users. The other things you mentioned are in a different sentence. Take out the "I believe" part. It makes the argument sound much weaker. Now that I answered, I have to go check my facebook. TTFN
Someone with a similar (or same) name as you posted this question later with, amazingly, the exact same thesis statement. Check the answer above.
6 - "is." It is a message. 8 - "founded" is probably a better answer. Though if someone is looking through a place they don't know, maybe he found several cities. Hard call. 9 - you probably picked the best answer, but released would be ok, too. 10- ans...
It looks like a few are quite wrong that you missed. Let me give you one example: ------- Students who want to make good grades study. Michelle studies. Therefore, Michelle wants to make good grades. ------- What if Michelle studies because her parents force her to? Corrected,...
90 divided by 2 equals...
1) Is 50,000 larger or smaller than 35,000? 2) Which commission should she therefore recieve? 3) What is 50,000 times the commission percentage divided by 100?
please help me or take a look
Yikes! How are you getting that answer. First off, you should learn that this class you are taking is math. It is not "please help me or take a look" class. :-) Moving on.. 3-7= -4 +4 x -4 = -16 5-16 = -11 -3 x -11= 33 37 + 33 = ?
You would have to start by deciding what you think is right. Until you do that, you won't get anywhere.
Isaac, a rectangle has: --4 sides --they aren't all equal unless it's a square --4 90 degree angles, none acute. How did you come up with rectangle? It doesn't fit ANY of the descriptions.