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Writeacher, here are some sentences I'd like you to revise. Thank you. 1) The teacher let the students off with a warning (let off the students is a mistake?) 2) I'm looking forward to my sister's letter. (I'm waiting impatiently for my sister's letter; I&#...
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Bobpursley, Ms Sue I urgently need you to check this paragraph. Thank you very much in advance!!! I made a change in the last sentence. 1) I spent my Easter holidays with my family at my grandparents' house in London. I had a very good time there, especially on the very la...
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Writeacher, I know you are not there. However, I urgently need someone of you to check this short story. I hope Ms Sue or anyone else will help me. 1) I spent my Easter holidays with my family at my grandparents' house in London. I had a very good time there, especially on...
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Writeacher, I'm finding it difficult to check these sentences, which need to be revised grammatically. 1) The Tempest is the last one of Shakespeare’s plays. It’s very different from his previous ones. In fact it is not a tragedy, like Macbeth or Hamlet, but a ro...
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Writeacher, how would you check this sentence? Prospero was his first king but now he pens Caliban up like a farm animal, so that he can't go anywhere he wants on the island. ("is anywhere he wants" possible??) I hope you are still there.
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I left out two last sentences on history. Thank you very much, Writeacher. 1) The 14th century was also marked by the rise of a religious movement of reforms called Lollardy, whose leader was John Wycliffe. 2) The movement, which began at Oxford University where Wycliffe taugh...
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I left out the following sentences.Thank you very much.I need to rephrase number 5 and make it more concise. 1) By the 14th century a new middle class, both rural an urban, existed. The merchants increased their power by loaning money to the king for mercenaries. 2) The yeomen...
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Thank you very much. Here are some more sentences on the same subject. Thank you. 1) The Hundred Years' War received a severe check from the 'Black Death', the bubonic plague which spread all over England in 1348. It was caused by fleas living on black rats which i...
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I still have to add a few sentences on history. Thank you very much. 1) War with France broke out in 1337 when Edward III claimed the crown of France because his mother was the French king's sister. This was the beginning of the Hundred Years' War, which was to last un...
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Can you please check these sentences on history? Thank you, Writeacher. 1) Richard was succeeded by his younger brother John I, called Lacklan because he lost Normandy and most of his French territories. 2) He levied higher taxes an his policy (of heavy taxation) met with fier...
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