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July 23, 2014

Posts by Kuromi


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Maths
Rewrite evaluate the followings 1. 32^4/5 2. 125^2/3 3. 1296^3/4 4. 243^4/5 5. 8^2/3 6. 27^2/3 7. 16^3/2 8. 625^5/4

math
The diameter of a bicycle wheel is 65cm. How far does the bicycle go in 20 revolutions of the wheel

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Writeacher, I responded to the last post with more to proofread, Thank you.

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Membership meaning belonging to society as far as gender goes. Girls doing girly things and boys doing male things. Children are taught from a young age to do these types of things and for instance if boys start wanting to wear nail polist or wear lipstick, society would not f...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Gender Stereotypes Society affects how the children of today perceive gender roles. From a very early age, the basic rules of membership are taught when girls learn to do feminine, girly things, such as playing with pretty dolls, and boys learn to do macho, masculine things, s...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Yes, I will be discussing how Disney portray female and male characters in their movies. I will work on the revisions right now and get back to you. Thank you!

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
I put a post earlier last nite. Did everyone miss it? :(

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Hi can someone proofread my introduction to a 7 page essay regarding Gender roles and Disney movies? Gender Stereotypes Society affects how the children of today perceive gender roles. From a very early age, the basic rules of membership are taught as girls are typically given...

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
I need to write a 7 page essay and I need some ideas for my paper so I could think of a thesis. I wrote a paper earlier on Gender roles, I'm not sure who helped me, but it is similar to this except this one is a research paper. I need at least 7 sources. Argue and discuss ...

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Ms. Writeacher I think revised it better this time. Greetings and Gestures Culture and society plays a large role on how individuals communicate with one another, including how they express themselves. There are various ways of communication such as through speaking, sign lang...

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It didn't post the whole essay, here is the rest. In Japan the standard greeting is done by taking a bow. Although handshakes may be acceptable with some people in Japan, they prefer the traditional bow when being greeted by each other. It is not only proper to bow but als...

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Writeacher - Here is the rest my essay for "Greetings and Gestures" Greetings and Gestures Culture and society plays a large role on how individuals communicate with one another, including how they express themselves. There are various ways of communication such as t...

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Writeacher I finished the rest of the essay, it's a group thing so I had to put everyone's essay into one. Greetings and Gestures Culture plays a large role on how individuals communicate with one another, including how they express themselves. There are various ways o...

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Thanks!

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How does this sound? Culture plays a large role on how individuals communicate with one another, including how they express themselves. There are various ways of communication such as through speaking, sign language, or body movement. Although most cultures might share the sam...

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Can I say: Because first impression is most important when first meeting someone, it is imperative be able to handle situations correctly by knowing what to do, as some people might take it offensively or take it personally by disrespecting them with a hug, even though it was ...

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Writeacher, is this better? Greetings and Gestures Culture plays a large role on how individuals communicate with one another, including how they express themselves. There are various ways of communication such as through speaking, sign language, or body movement. Although mos...

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Thank you Bob, I did have an example like that but was told to take it out. If you read the original you will see that I had included everything you said but maybe I included more than I should have. But yes I will do that.

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hmmm okay, I get it now. Thank you!

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I'm still having a bit of trouble with my introduction and thesis. This is what I have, I hope it's any better. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with each other whether it is through speaking, sign language, or body movement....

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I'm doing a research project and chose "Greetings and Gestures" for my topic. So far I have my introduction and thesis. Greetings and Gestures All culture groups have various ways of communicating with one another. Some forms may be universal while others may var...

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
I only see one SHOULD and it says people should be seen for their true personality, other than that I see no other shoulds. How do i change that part? I see another 'should' but that one was already there, you might have over looked that one. "people should know t...

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
Sorry I forgot to put my name up there.

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
Hi Miss Sue I agree with what you said so I changed part of my introduction around and changed the thesis, and I changed the last part of the conclusion. Can you let me know your thoughts? Race and Culture Society plays a large role on race and culture. Whether a person is bla...

English1A-Critical Thinking and Writing
Miss Sue could you read it one more time if it makes sense, I changed the part about someone being born with the preconceived notion, I meant they are raised by parents that way but I don't know how to make it make sense. And I did a conclusion so I'm hoping it makes s...

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
I said that part wrong. I didn't mean born with the preconceived notion, I think meant children are raised with these beliefs, not born with it. My mistake.

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
THANK YOU!!

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
Hi Miss Sue could you proofread again? I think we had a misunderstanding on the race and ethnicity part. Maybe I wrote it wrong but see if this makes better sense. Society plays a big role on race and culture. Whether a person is black or white, Asian or Hispanic, there will a...

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
Yes I am an Asian and I can definitely relate, I too am born and raised in Hawaii. I was trying to explain the differences with race and ethnicity and maybe I wrote it wrong. I was trying to say that even though two people of the same race may have the same the same ethnicity ...

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
next two paragraphs, havent done conclusion yet. America has been known as the melting pot for a while now. But despite the many years of foreigners and immigrants traveling and living in the U.S., America is still separated in many ways due to racism and prejudices. What is t...

English1A - Critical Thinking and Writing
Hi Miss Sue or anyone else. Can you please proofread my essay on Race and Culture? Race and Culture Society plays a big role on race and culture. Whether a person is black or white, Asian or Hispanic, there will always be that someone who attempts to identify and stereotype ot...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
first two supporting paragraphs.... America has been known as the melting pot for a while now. But despite the many years of foreigners and immigrants traveling and living in the U.S., America is still separated in many ways due to racism and prejudices. What is the difference...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Okay I changed my introduction a little to improve on it. Society plays a big role on race and culture. Whether a person is black or white, Asian or Hispanic, there will always be that someone who attempts to identify others based on their appearance such as the color of their...

English1A- Critical Thinking and Writing
Hi Miss Sue or anyone else. How is my introduction so for for my argumentative essay on Race and Culture? Society plays a big role on race and culture. Whether a person is black or white, Asian or Hispanic, there will always be that someone who will look at another person and ...

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Thanks you@! That is actually someone like me, Asian but born as an American. I could definitely relate!

English1A-previous post
I responded to my previous post. Can someone help me, I'm not sure what time it is where everyone is at. I am in California but sll the posts is 3 hours ahead of me.

math
Yah I figured that, just checking, thank you.

math
is it possible to find out the sides of the triangle just based on base and height alone? base is 20 ft and ht is 7 feet. would like to know the right and left sides if they are equal on both sides.

English1A
Okay my professor approved of the second thesis, now I just need 3 solid arguments to support my thesis. I thought I would support it by discussing what is and the differences of racism, stereotyping, prejudice in my first paragraph. Second paragraph maybe discussing how peopl...

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Hmm i thought if it is an "argumentative" essay then it would okay to say that. My professor has not said anything about my last 3 essays. I got A's on all of them. Is this thesis any better? As the United States continue to evolve becoming the "melting pot&...

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I need to come up with a thesis for my next essay regarding Race and Culture. I want to talk about how people judge others by the color of their skin or their race. For example, I feel offended that because I'm asian, people expect me to know my math and I don't. I am ...

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Hi, I am reading a story called, "I'm Black, You're White, Who's Innocent" I just have a question on what "account" means in this question? I looked up the definition but came up with many. Could someone explain to me this question in a differen...

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
Tattoos, well I'm referring to "genders" I didn't research the history behind it, if it were only done for men, if so than I can definitely add tattoos in there saying that men use to get them but now more women are getting them too.

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
Ok well its due today I don't have time to do a whole different essay. Thanks guys, I will let you know my grade for it on Monday. So far I got an A for the last two essays that you folks helped me with. Appreciate it!!

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
Thesis: Despite the talks and stares of others, people of different gender identities have a right to express their individuality, and others should accept people for who they are and not judge those who are different based on appearance just because they do not live up to soc...

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
so what this means is that I need more evidence to support my thesis?

english1A- Gender Myths Essay
Can someone proofread my essay and tell me if it makes sense? I don't want it to sound like I'm going off the subject. Gender Myths (Introduction)Society plays a big role on gender identities. People were always taught to dress and behave according to one’s gender...

english1A- need help with my thesis
Ok I think I was going the wrong way with my Gender topic. I think I should write about how times have changed and society evolved, women and men do not perform their traditional roles as they use to and do not dress the same as they use to. And women go to school now, work, v...

English1A - need help on argument/thesis
Can someone help me with my argument/thesis? My introduction... let's see if this works. Gender myths Some people wear earrings, others do not. Some people wear nail polish, while others do not. Whatever the case is, there are some people, whether male or female, who dress...

english1A - argument/these
Here is an alternative introduction. Throughout history gender roles and identities were based primarily on the human biological anatomy. From a very early age, girls were taught to be feminine and do girly things, while boys were taught to be masculine doing macho things. As ...

english1A - argument/these
I think it is too broad. To accept others for who they are, not judge them. I'm not sure if I want my argument to be on letting individuals be who they want to be as far as genders, and not judging them and accepting them. Or not judging by someone's appearance and mis...

english1A - argument/these
Oh shoot. I keep forgetting to change my Word document to a text document. for some reason it doesn't post here if I don't. My introduction... let's see if this works. Gender myths Some people wear earrings, others do not. Some people wear nail polish, while others...

english1A- Need help with my argument/thesis
darn that is so weird that it doesn't post darn it! I'll post a new question.

english1A- Need help with my argument/thesis
This is my introduction... Gender Myths Some people wear earrings, others do not. Some people wear nail polish, while others do not. Whatever the case is, there are some people, whether male or female, who dress a certain way, either get mistaken for the wrong gender or the wr...

english1A - response to last post
Ms Sue, You did not read the previous posts, I did post my assignments. On Thursday October 1, 2009 at 2:04am.

english1A - response to last post
I did post my assignment in my first response

english1A - response to last post
Posted by Kuromi on Thursday, October 1, 2009 at 3:53pm. quotes I'm choosing (2-4): Appearances by Carmen Vazquez "Men who are not pursuing sexual conquests of women at every available opportunity, who disdain sports, who choose to stay at home and be a house-husband,...

english1A - Need to think of an argument/thesis
But I'm not in High School, I'm in college and my professor encourages to write about anything we feel. These are the stories we are reading about this week and she wants our essays to be related to the stories somehow. Our discussion last class period was all about ho...

english1A - Need to think of an argument/thesis
quotes I'm choosing (2-4): Appearances by Carmen Vazquez "Men who are not pursuing sexual conquests of women at every available opportunity, who disdain sports, who choose to stay at home and be a house-husband, who are employed as hairdressers, designers, or house cl...

english1a - topic/thesis
The questions my professor asked is just thoughts to ponder about, ideas for our paper but we can choose any topic we want as long as it's related to the stories assigned. I would like to narrow my subject/topic down to these questions... Is your essay subject a case where...

english1a - topic/thesis
I need to think of an argument to write about before I think of a thesis, our topic has to do with Gender Roles and Society. this is our assignment: Gender Roles Essay Each society has its own definition for the proper roles of men and women, but for the most part these defini...

english1A - Does my thesis sound better?
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

english1A - Does my thesis sound better?
Which intro sounds better for my thesis? Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that almost every person strives for; the American Dream. The Am...

english1A - still working on my thesis
I'm still debating on these two. Individuals not only need to realize the true meaning of success, but must also know that with enough determination and motivation, and with the right attitude, the American Dream can become a reality. If society would realize the true mean...

english1A - still working on my thesis
oh i actually changed my thesis. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and the right attitude, the American Dream can become a reality. think it kinda sounds li...

english1A - still working on my thesis
I have a couple. If society would realize the true meaning of success and take advantage of opportunities available to them, they would know that with enough determination and motivation, dreams are definitely possible. Society not only needs to realize the true meaning of suc...

english1a- my thesis, is it better?
I re did my thesis.. Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different...

english1a- my thesis, is it better?
Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different things to many peopl...

english1A- need help with thesis and to proofread
yes that is my argument. that the american dream is possible.

english1A- need help with thesis and to proofread
My professor says my thesis needs "more argument." does my essay sound good and strong and argumentative? Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is...

english1A-need help with thesis
is this better? Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different thin...

english1A-need help with thesis
This is my intro on Individual Opportunity, a myth or reality. But my professor says that my thesis in the last sentences needs "more argument." Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land...

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okay it didnt work. let me try again. Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream c...

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yay it worked! let me see if it will post my whole essay. Individual Opportunity: Myth or Reality Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that ev...

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Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream can mean different things to many peopl...

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Individual Opportunity: Myth or Reality Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of freedom and opportunities, there is one dream that everyone strives for; the American Dream. The American Dream...

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Are we allowed to post my essay here for proofreading? why is only the first line showing up? Individual Opportunity: Myth or Reality (introduction) Many people have dreams whether it is to buy their dream car, dream house, or go on their dream vacation. Here in the land of fr...

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