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You are PERFECTLY correct!
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3. I think perhaps honest would be better than either true or faithful. 4. Dancing 5, comma after bananas 8. sweatpants is fine
Other synonyms are: accordingly, ergo, hence, so, thereupon, thus, wherefore
Consequently...can also be used
Have you read these? Is so, write down some that you found... We will be happy to make further suggestions.
MC Look at the effect of the car on American society...HUGE! http://www.google.com/#hl=en&expIds=17259,24813,26637,26992,27178&sugexp=ldymls&xhr=t&q=The+effect+of+the+car+on+the+development+of+industry&cp=52&pf=p&sclient=psy&aq=f&aqi=&aql=&oq=The+effect+of+the+car+on+the+...
Check this site: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/crucible/canalysis.html I would look at either of the two male characters there. There are a number of ideas that would be of help to you.
Particularly in short stories, the author is making a specific point.... a lesson to be considered. Very seldom does the author come right out and say... this is the lesson. Think about some of O'Henry's stories.
You are exactly right! Adverbs modify adverbs!
Missed one noun. "midst" The rest are correct
This site will be of help. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/gatsby/
Informative/Analytic Essay Assignment
I would imagine that the economy would be a concern there as it is everywhere. The up-coming elections might be of concern. Look in your town newspaper for , especially the editorial section, to see what the local people are concerned about particularly.
1. good 2. One of the guests offered to get a candle. 3. He suggested that I get a room on the top floor. 4.She suggested that we have a party on Sunday. 5. good. "beginning of the film" 6. The police sargeant ordered us not to fire except in self-defense. 7. good, ...
a bowl/ or pot and a spoon.
That means five of each of those.
I think that reforestation would be extremely interesting!
Do you have choices?
No, Pop Culture is not just referring to music. Here is a good article on Pop Culture, its meaning and its impact. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Popular_culture
Think of a "lesson" you learned when you were younger though a an experience that was funny/or dramatic. Then make it into a "fiction" story. For instance I used to play mumbldy peg with a friend. That is a game played with a knife. My grandmother ...
Do you have choices to make?
Make a list of the negative aspects of having the bonfire. Then rank them. Use the worst result as your main support for your thesis and the others as additional support.
This site will help you with that: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/544/01/
You are absolutely right!
This site will be of great help. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/crucible
First sentence has a subject/verb disagreement. "disecting IS wrong". "layed" should be "laid" Use a comma after "laid out,but" Semi-colon after Think of this way; how. "Hands-on" is hyphenated. I wouldn't think so. ...
english grade 1
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1. between is used when comparing 2 objects. Among is used when comparing more that two. 2. Any of those possibilities would be fine. 3. Goes beyond appearances 4. fine 5. Any of those would be correct. 6. Either would be correct. 7. Only following ghetto. 8. Either is fine. 9...
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Check this site: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
I would agree.
1. "get" is fine. 2. good 3.perform would be better there. 4. good 5. good 6. good 7. Either "allowed" or "granted" would be fine. 8. A song about love is better. 9. good
i need to make my own proverb
I think that is a great proverb. Can you adapt it to getting ones homework done. Ie. An essay never wrote itself. <G>
2. civilizing 3. doesn't make sense at all. He was looked upon by the natives" doesn' say anything. Work on all the sentences here. 4. "to face" 5. highly....with patches on them. 6. discovered and his hatred for what he had discovered.
Check this site: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gravitation
1) No problems! 2): He walked to the central station. good! 3) The Expedition to Africa consisted of groups of ivory traders . 3) Better: He described him, saying that he had done horrible things. 4) During the break, I usually go out in the back school yard since the front ...
Wheelchair has to agree with the number of persons you are taking out. children more than one - wheelchairs patient = one - wheelchair.
Candy Strippers is the name of a group of volunteers (usually teenagers) at a hospital. They wear stripped uniforms .
The hint is that he "sinned" with the maiden and his guilt would be written across his face.
Home > Library > History, Politics & Society > British HistoryBerlin, Congress of, 1878. A summit conference under the presidency of Bismarck, in June 1878. Lord Salisbury and Lord Beaconsfield (Benjamin Disraeli) represented Britain. European opinion was uneasy at ...
Combine 1 and 2. 1) Kurtz's main talent was that he was a brilliant talker who could charm his audience with his words. 3.3) The manager hoped Marlow would arrive at the inner station after Kurtzs death. Thank you very much for heping me. Here are some more ...
These are excellent help. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/frankenstein/
I would agree with that...
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#1 doesn''t make sense. I don't know if you are trying to say Did you mean Learning French is difficult ?
No, #2 is not correct.
Read and Write
Columbus Indiana is a city and would not have 'human'characteristics.
#1. comma before "but" 2. Using a small rope he saw hanging over the side, he pulled himself on to the ship. 3. He used the raft to take food, guns and a toolbox back to shore.
college (media culture & society)
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Look up the definition of diffusion. That will immediately give you the answer.
I like #3 best. I would use the term "sports counselor". Use "membership" instead of subscription. #3 Either of those are used and correct.
#1 comma following listeners, not a semi-colon. #4 "on" would be correct.
The first three are fine. 4. Combine those two sentences... Marlow tells us about Kurtz; however, the book deals with Marlow's river journey to Africa.
Here are sites for those terms: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Khene please check your spelling on Tai thu http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metallophone http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Piphat http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2dAgkRgDmso http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mor_lam_sing http://en...
There is not one on-line. You need to read the book.
MEDIA AND AMERICAN CULTURE
Business and commerce are pretty much the same thing. They both are "trade". They trade goods and services. Check this site. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Commerce
Here are a number of very good biographies. http://www.google.com/#hl=en&expIds=17259,24813,25856,26447,26515&sugexp=ldymls&xhr=t&q=bio.+Paul+Revere&cp=16&pf=p&sclient=psy&aq=f&aqi=&aql=&oq=bio.+Paul+Revere&gs_rfai=&pbx=1&fp=8ce9e1c25799f52d
That is not a sentence. Look at this. Minnie Wright's insanity, caused by isolation, an unhappy marriage and gender differences, relate to the murdering of her husband.
History (grade 5) please help
Bobby, Originally the Portugese were looking for a better trade route to Asia. They decided that they would try going west instead of east... as a result they "ran into" the American continent. The main focus of the trips to the Americas was to increase trade in the ...
extrinsic: not forming part of or belonging to a thing : extraneous b. originating from or on the outside especially originating outside a part and acting upon the part as a whole - ¡ muscles of the tongue arousal 1. 1to awaken from sleep 2. 2to rouse or stimulate ...
Yes, well done.
What does "lift you higher" mean? What kind of people are these?
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This site will give you the answer to that. http://www.healing-arts.org/spider/tainoindians.htm
Those sentences look good.
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Your computer is technology. Your telephone, Blackberry, electricity, and yes a shower is uses technology. How does the water get from the river to your house? How is the soap made?
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Northern Argentina is nearer the equator. Southern Argentina is nearer the South Pole.
What is your question?
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I would suggestion that you take a sheet of paper and put the Freedom charter rights on one half and the Constitution rights on the other half . Then you can easily see the comparison.
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He believes that lotteries are good things, and that the young people who want to get rid of them are crazy.
#1. I prefer the "if" clause at the beginning of the sentence with a comma before the main clause. #2 If the words are given, then use "the" suitable word. The better choice would depend on whether more than one inital is given.
What is your question? What you have written doesn't make sense.
Some historians say Nova Scotia, others will say the New England coast. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/L'Anse_aux_Meadows
Look at the reasons WHY they came from Europe. What kinds of "regulation" governed their lives? What happened if they had a "disagreement" with the government in Europe?
Intro to World Religions
Look at the main figure in those stories. How are each of those figures similar to the image of Christ in Mary's gospel? How are they different? Make a chart for each of those figures... one side for like, one side for difference. Then you will be able to make a valid ...
A thesis statement would be something as simple as: Many people in today's society share the same issues as ____ in the book_______.
Go to this site and look at the analysis of themes area. After you have read it, see if you can think of themes common in today's society. Repost with your thoughts of this. http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/beowulf/themes.html
These sites will help with your essay. http://www.oldandsold.com/articles10/famous-buildings-10.shtml http://library.thinkquest.org/10098/greek.htm
Go to Sparknotes.com. Put in the title of the book. I believe they have the best review/analysis.
I think you need to look at your answers again.
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English 3 honors
Think of a group of people who are not Christian in belief. How might they believe their world was created? You might read some Indian myths or Eskimo myths to get ideas.
Intro to World Religions
I think you definitely have gotten the gist of the gospel.
Intro to World Religions
This will give some ideas on the Gospel of Mary. http://www.thenazareneway.com/
Intro to World Religions
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Yes! A thesis statement is ONE sentence which your essay will explain or prove. See if you can take the last sentence of that and make it into a thesis.
english 3rd grade
Controlling global warming is a big idea.
Keeping your school litter free is a small idea.
Think of things you associate with a guitar: flowers, people, objects.Then these things might take the place of notes coming from the guitar. I have a lovely lithograph of a girl playing a guitar in front of a window that has a flower on the sill.
Guam and Puerto Rico are both American Territories and PR is definitely considered a country.
A territory is not a nation. A nation is independent. A Territory is not.
We have no idea what is in the prologue! We are not associated with any school or any book. After you read the prologue and answer the question, please repost and we will be happy to make suggestions or corrections if needed.