Meter establishes a uniform rhythm in poetry.
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3. I think perhaps honest would be better than either true or faithful. 4. Dancing 5, comma after bananas 8. sweatpants is fine
Other synonyms are: accordingly, ergo, hence, so, thereupon, thus, wherefore
Consequently...can also be used
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Check this site: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/crucible/canalysis.html I would look at either of the two male characters there. There are a number of ideas that would be of help to you.
Particularly in short stories, the author is making a specific point.... a lesson to be considered. Very seldom does the author come right out and say... this is the lesson. Think about some of O'Henry's stories.