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I still have a few doubts on the use of the word "narrator". Shall I refer to it as "it" or "he". 1)For example: "The narrator can be obtrusive, when he/it interferes in the narration giving his/its own points of view. 2)I added a few other s...
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I forgot to include these very last sentences. Thank you very much! 1) From 1982 to 2005 (two thousand and five/twenty oh five) he worked hard and appeared in 29 films. How long did he work hard? From when to when did he work hard? How many films did he appear in? 2)In 1993 he...
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Thank you very much for your corrections. Here are the last sentences of the day. Thank you. 1)Are the following clothing items correct: a patterned cotton t-shirt, a navy blue turtleneck sweater, a big black silver watch with a green screen (?), white tight jeans (or tight wh...
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Could you please revise these sentences, too? Thank you. 1)Advertising has also a fundamental role on (?) the way we dress. If I were (was?) invited to a New Year’s party, I would wear a long grey long-sleeved shirt over a pair of black leggings and a belt over (??) it. 2...
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Thank you very much. Here are some more sentences I'm not sure of. 1)I worked in a gym for a (one also possible?) year. 2)In 1989 film director Stanley Kubrik offered him the part (also: role?) of Bill Harford in the movie Eyes wide shut. 3)Where did he move (“to”...
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Can you please have a look at these sentences? They are written as if they were part of an oral conversation. The general rules of punctuation are not respected and I find it difficult to check them. 1)I always dress what I like and in a simple way. 2)My favourite kinds of clo...
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Thank you very much for your corrections. Here are some more sentences on the same theme I'm not sure of. 1)The narrator can be a first-person narrator, who/which (?) uses the first-person voice . 2)He can be used to bring the reader close to the feelings of the narrator, ...
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Thank you very much for your suggestions. Here are some more sentences I'd like you to check. 1)The first-person narrator can coincide with a character in the story or the protagonist who recounts his life (also: who tells of/about his life, who narrates about his life ??)...
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I forgot to include the following statements. I really hope you can have a look at them, too. 1)The Celts practised (?) agriculture. 2) The Romans improved the Celts' way of living (?) by bringing (with them/introducing) their civilisation, their language and a new legal s...
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Thank you for your corrections. Here are some more sentences on history I'm not sure of (especially the parts included in brackets). 1)The Celts were expert farmers (?), hunters and deep-sea fishermen.The Romans introduced (I need a synonym: brought?) their civilization an...
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