for this profile story i'm doing one of my sentences was Originally from central Indiana, Gilbert did not grow up in a diverse neighborhood, nor did she attend a diverse school system. My teacher told me to elaborate on when I say diverse.. Is this better? Growing up in ce...
I'm terrible at describing things. My prof wants me to give a visual/sensory description of this Child care center I wrote a profile story on... What's some advice on writing descriptive?
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Sorry for bugging you guys.. But can someone proof read this paragraph. Ohio Sen. Rob Portman is the first Republican senator to endorse same-sex marriage. Portman changed his views on same-sex marriage once he learned his son is gay. " I want all my children, including m...
i mean't its not ideological* being that he finally had something personal happen to him
I don't know if you guys will be able to help me with this.. but being that Sen Rob Portman is backing same- sex marriage since his son came out, could that be seen as like hypocritical, or more so ideological, being that it's now personal?
Same-sex marriage should be legalized because it is uncivilized to deny homosexuals their civil rights. The Constitution guarantees everyone equal rights and opportunities, however, gays are denied both in terms of marriage. is this better? I have support in other paragraphs
we had to take a stand on gay marriage.. can you proofread my opening and help me with revising if necessary? Same-sex marriage should be legalized because it is uncivilized to deny gay people a civil right that the Constitution guarantees everyone, equality, which means that ...
we have to give an opinion on a global issue
would End Childhood Obesity be an OK title.. or is that vague?
what are some arguments that could be made on child obesity
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