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October 26, 2014

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From my experience at the elementary school, I have gained insight about what happens inside a first grade classroom, such as the teacher’s responsibilities, and the high demands of attention students require from their teachers. I also learned how this particular school ...
May 6, 2008

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The experience did alter my career goals, but I feel that the experience I gained is still very valuable even though my career goals have changed. What I have learned through this experience can be applied to other aspects of my life. If I become a parent I will know what is ...
May 6, 2008

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Through this experience I learned that one of my strengths as a professional is my ability to motivate children to learn or to behave. When a child did not want to finish his or her math class work, I used positive words to get the child to finish his or her work. I also used ...
May 6, 2008

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I have realized that I get very overwhelmed when I cannot manage teaching a large group of students and that is one of my challenges that I face. I try to address this problem by teaching small groups of children at a time or I divide the students and have them work in small ...
May 6, 2008

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I also learned how some children think positively and others think more negatively. For instance, when I would try to explain a subject to a child who thinks negatively, he or she will tell me that he or she cannot do it. The other children who think positively try their best ...
May 6, 2008

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Another goal I set out for this experience was to learn how children think and learn around this age. Also, how they interact with others socially. I learned many ways to motivate children to learn. The teacher uses many rewards like, small toys, stickers, stars, and scholar ...
May 6, 2008

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My goals were to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is something I want to pursue in the future. Based on the current budget cuts, teaching does not seem like an appealing job at the moment. I do enjoy spending time with children and watching them ...
May 6, 2008

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From my experience at the elementary school, I have gained insight knowledge of what happens inside a first grade classroom, such as the responsibilities that are involved with being a teacher, and the high demands of attention that is needed from students. I also learned how ...
May 6, 2008

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Thank you for your time. :)
April 22, 2008

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The United States, incarcerates its citizens at much greater rates than any other nation in the world (Scott, 2008). Incarceration costs in the U.S. have risen to $65 billion a year (Scott, 2008). Many crimes committed by gangs and gang members cause severe harm not to ...
April 22, 2008

English
Can I get this proofread please? The hypothesis of this experiment claimed the apterous mutation would be recessive. The results from all eight lab sections supported the hypothesis, but unfortunately the results from lab section seven did not support it. Based on the chi ...
April 15, 2008

English
Thank you! =)
April 15, 2008

English
5) What are your overall conclusion about the article? Also give two original examples of how the information in the article could be applied to real life on to working with children in the home and the second to working with them in community settings such as school. Are my ...
April 15, 2008

English grammar
Thank you!
April 14, 2008

English grammar
According to Garmezy, a researcher of resilient individuals explains resiliency by the presence of “protective factors,” those qualities or situations that help alter or reverse expected negative outcomes.
April 14, 2008

English grammar
I would recommend parents to use articles that are written by college professors, a doctor in education, or a specialist in child development, since these are more credible articles than articles written by parents or family members.
April 14, 2008

English
"in" before fact on the last sentence.
April 13, 2008

English
Hi, can someone proofread this and let me know if there are any grammatical mistake. I'll appreciate it. Thanks. This experiment was preformed to determine if Drosophila fruit flies inherit apterous (ap) or a wild type (+/+) phenotypes. The wild type is the normal ...
April 13, 2008

English
Thank you for your suggestions. They are very helpful! :)
April 12, 2008

English
Our professor wants us to summarize a web article that is casual, one that would be read by non-child development people.
April 12, 2008

English
W_W_W*e-bility* com/articles/child_resiliance*php *= dot
April 12, 2008

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The author provides many examples that explain the three main resources of resilience. She also mentions how children who are younger will experience the “I HAVE” resource more frequently compared to an older child. As children age, they rely more on the “I AM&#...
April 12, 2008

English
Hi, I made the changes suggested on my last post for the first paragraph. I type another paragraph and I would please like it to be proofread as well. Thanks! :) The author of the article defines resilience as the individual’s capacity to minimize or overcome adversity. ...
April 12, 2008

English
Hi, can someone please proofread and check my grammar. I'll appreciate it. Thanks! 3) what were the main points of the article? Provide concise summary. The author of the article defines resilience as the individual’s capacity to develop resilience in the face of ...
April 11, 2008

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Oops, I didn't put my name on the above post. Sorry about that.
April 10, 2008

English
Hi, can I get someone's feedback on my response on the question above. I want to make sure I answered the question fully, correctly, and clearly. Thanks!
April 10, 2008

English
2) What credibility did you give initially to an article drawn from the W_W_W? What are your thoughts about the practical experience versus scientific information as credible sources of information about children or families (as applied to the article)? Why? When I initially ...
April 10, 2008

Profreading
I'm not sure if I answered his questions for the second part fully and correctly? I'll appreciate your feedback on that as well. Thanks! :)
April 9, 2008

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Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. For this reason it is vital for parents to help build their child’s backbone ...
April 9, 2008

Profreading
This is what the paper is about. Choose a recent (within the last 2 years) article written for parents, teachers, or other family members on how to optimize the development of children (any age between conception through adolescence may be used) or written for family members ...
April 9, 2008

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When I initially viewed the article I gave it some credibility since the article contained a description about the author who wrote it. The description includes a picture of the author along with detailed information of the author’s professional history. It also includes ...
April 9, 2008

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When I initially viewed the article I gave it some credibility since the article contained a description about the author who wrote it. The description includes a picture of the author along with detailed information of the author’s professional history. It also includes...
April 9, 2008

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Thanks for your comments. I thought I copied and paste what I had for the two questions above, but the post is blank. I'll post it again. Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences...
April 9, 2008

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I'm not sure if I answered his questions for the second part fully and correctly? I'll appreciate your feedback on that as well. Thanks! :)
April 9, 2008

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Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. For this reason it is vital for parents to help build their child’s backbone...
April 9, 2008

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This is what the paper is about. Choose a recent (within the last 2 years) article written for parents, teachers, or other family members on how to optimize the development of children (any age between conception through adolescence may be used) or written for family members ...
April 9, 2008

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oops I caught a spelling mistake. *interested in this topic...
April 9, 2008

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The ---- stand for the website google
April 9, 2008

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Resilience during childhood is one of the most important qualities a person can have, because it helps with difficult life experiences, such as lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. These reasons make it vital for parents to help build their child’s backbone ...
April 9, 2008

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Our professor provided us a content guide for this particular essay. Pasted below is one of his guidelines. 1. Describe the process you used for finding a web article suitable for this assignment. What advise would you give to a parent on finding an article on your topic.
April 9, 2008

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Thank you for your help!
April 9, 2008

Proofreading
Hi, This is my introduction paragraph for an essay I am writing. I am not really confident on my grammar and sentence stucture. I want to make sure the introduction sounds smooth and formal. I would like to have someone's feedback on it. Thanks! The topic of my paper is ...
April 9, 2008

Essay
Hi, I have to write a web article evaluation paper. The professor wants us to pick a casual article that has to do with child development and family studies. Then, he wants us to use scholarly sources to evaluate the article. I don't know what a casual article looks like. ...
April 7, 2008

English composition
Hi, I have to write a reflection paper for my human development class. I am working with first graders in an elementary school and our professor wants to know this: Choose one thing about your practicum site that you think should be different. This can be something procedural...
April 6, 2008

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or should I say this instead of my last sentence above. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes a tight-knit family environment where teachers help bring parents, families, and the community inside the students’ educational circle.
March 24, 2008

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According to CCMS, the small size of this school helps the downtown urban community meet their needs, in particular at-risk students from low-income households because the students are given more individual attention by faculty members. As a small charter school, CCMS promotes...
March 24, 2008

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Thank you! Yes, this is the Youth PROMISE Act.
March 11, 2008

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Can someone proofread this for me please? Thanks. Under the Youth PROMISE Act, communities facing the greatest youth gang and crime challenges will come together to develop a compressive plan for implementing evidence-based prevention and intervention strategies. One of the ...
March 11, 2008

English/Government
Hi, I am stuck on a assignment for class. I have to write a social policy paper. I have to find a piece of legislation and find out its purpose and other information about it. I also have to include research about this bill. I went to Thomas.loc.gov/ I typed gangs on the ...
March 8, 2008

biology
Hello, I have a question. For one molecule of glucose are there six CO2 molecules released during cellular respiration? I'm looking at the kreb/ citric acid diagram and I'm not sure if it is four or six CO2 molecules being released. I'll appreciate your response. ...
March 6, 2008

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okay thank you. I have to go to class right now. I'm late. I will fix the rest of the paragraphs with your suggestions later. Thank you so much!! =)
February 19, 2008

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The children in the class I am working are told what the consequences are for bad behavior. For example, the teacher will give her students warnings and then she’ll eventually give her students red slips which takes away the child’s play time at recess or other ...
February 19, 2008

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The school I am doing my practicum is very different compared to The New City School. It has a large playground and a smaller one for the kindergarten students. The large playground contains a lot of free space for the children to run and play. It also has a slide, hand bars, ...
February 19, 2008

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From what I learned from The New City School the school lacks rewards and punishments for the students. The students there are not given any grades, homework assignments, stickers, certificates, stars, and do not have clear consequences for bad behavior. The reason why the ...
February 19, 2008

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During the tour I noticed the area where the children eat contained three types of trash cans, one for cans, paper, and plastic, the other one for food waste, and they also had a regular trash can. The school wants to teach all the students to be environmentally friendly. They...
February 19, 2008

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Based on the tour I was given, I noticed that the students in the primary classrooms did not have any desks. They were sitting on a dirty rug on the floor. The students in grades three to five were sitting on small tables together. The students in grades 6-8 where given better...
February 19, 2008

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The lectures in the classrooms are bilingual. The teacher will switch languages each day. For instance, each subject will be taught in Spanish one day and English the next day. Gradually the students whose first language is English will learn and understand the new language as...
February 19, 2008

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Is it where I typed teacher has a group?
February 19, 2008

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The classrooms at The New City School are limited to 20 students. There are about 10 teachers in the school. The ratio of children to teachers is 20:1 in grades K-8. The school provides teacher assistants in the elementary classes so that the child-to-adult ratio can be ...
February 19, 2008

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The staff, Board of Directors, and parents have developed a new curriculum and renovated an abandoned building into a school that now holds 190 students from kindergarten to eighth grade. The building was formally a medical clinic in 1948. The three story building is now a ...
February 19, 2008

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The New City School’s mission is to provide a healthy, thoughtful, and intimate environment to students, emphasizing community building over competition; as well as a high quality, free, and public education alternative to the community. The NCS was founded by two ...
February 19, 2008

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I am trying to copy and paste it. I tried to past the whole essay, but it wouldn't let me. Then, I tried to paste it by sections, but now it will not allow me to continue pasting it. I'm going to try it again. In response to your question above, can I say this instead...
February 19, 2008

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I'm having trouble posting my essay. I get a message that says Homework Help: Error(s) You are not allowed to post internet addresses. I am not posting internet addresses. I don't know why I am not being allowed to post.
February 19, 2008

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It doesn't allow me to paste my example. I don't know why?
February 19, 2008

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Their academic program is based on the work of several important learning theories.
February 19, 2008

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As a small charter school, The Nxx Cxx School promotes an individualized approach to education.
February 19, 2008

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The school consist of 190 elementary and middle school students. According to NCS, the size of this school helps the urban community meet their needs, in particular students from families whose second language is English and students from low-income households.
February 19, 2008

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The Site I visited is The Nxx Cxx School (NCS) located in downtown Long Beach; it is a K-8 public charter school. Their education program emphasizes bilingualism and multiculturalism, creative expression, reasoning, health and community engagement.
February 19, 2008

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Hi, Can someone proofread this for me and let me know if I followed the directions for this assignment. Directions: Detailed information about the agency, an evaluation of the site and comparison of the site with experiences in the practicum setting should be reported.
February 19, 2008

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oh. I didn't get what she meant on that part. I understand now. Thanks.
February 4, 2008

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I eliminated a lot of words. I tried, I don't know what to do.
February 4, 2008

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I'll would like someone to proofread this for me. Thanks in advance.
February 4, 2008

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My first goal is to finish the 90 hours of work by the deadline by ensuring that I get a minimum of 6 hours of work completed for each week during this semester. My second goal is to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is something I want to pursue in...
February 4, 2008

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In this experience I hope to help assist the teacher and make the children’s learning environment more productive. For instance, I can help the teacher by checking homework and grading tests or checking other student assignments. Also, I can help the teacher set up the ...
February 4, 2008

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I am hoping to gain experience working with children and becoming a good professional. This experience can provide some growth in my working skills, help me work well with others and independently. For instance, I can learn how to adapt to new situations or changes during this...
February 4, 2008

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I expect my involvement at this site will assist me by giving me an insider perspective of what it is like to be a first grade teacher and what skills are required for this position. The practicum experience will provide insight of the skills, attitudes, knowledge, and ...
February 4, 2008

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I believe my training in the field of Human Development will be useful in my practicum site because the children there are developing into future adults. The course I took called, Human Development 307I Childhood through Adolescents, explains the cognitive and social skills ...
February 4, 2008

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The practicum site I selected is an elementary school. I will be assisting a first grade teacher during the semester, helping her with her students, and other teacher responsibilities. This practicum site was selected because being a first grade teacher is one of my career ...
February 4, 2008

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Instructions for this essay assignment (relection paper). For this paper, you should think about what you want to get out of your practicum experience. The 90 hours you spend at this site should be an opportunity not only for you to give something to the organization at which ...
February 4, 2008

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Thank you both for your suggestions. I appreciate it. I reposted the essay.
February 3, 2008

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My first goal is to finish the 90 hours of work by the deadline by ensuring that I get a minimum of 6 hours of work completed for each week during this semester. My second goal is to learn more about this career and to discover whether teaching is something I want to pursue in...
February 3, 2008

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In this experience I hope to help assist the teacher and make the children’s learning environment more productive. By helping the teacher she can have more time to teach her students while I help her do some of her responsibilities as a teacher. For instance, I can help ...
February 3, 2008

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I am hoping to gain experience in working with children and also becoming a good professional from this experience. I hope to show some growth in working with others or independently. For instance, I hope to be able to adapt to new situations or changes during this experience ...
February 3, 2008

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I expect my involvement at this site will assist me by giving me an insider perspective of what it is like to be a first grade teacher and what skills it takes to be a good teacher. It will help me get some insight of the skills, attitudes, knowledge, and behaviors that are ...
February 3, 2008

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I imagine my training in the field of Human Development will come into play in the work I will be doing, because I will be working with a group of people who will be developing into future adults. I imagine the course I took called, Human Development 307I Childhood through ...
February 3, 2008

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Hi, can someone proofread this for me. I'll appreciate it. Thanks in advance. The practicum site I selected is an elementary school. I will be assisting a first grade teacher during the semester. I will be helping her with her students and with other teacher ...
February 3, 2008

English Composition
Thank you. So, was that the only sentence that I need to work on?
February 3, 2008

English Composition
All humans have one commonality which is death. In order to survive in this world we need to have food, be healthy, and stay safe from violence.
February 3, 2008

English Composition
Hi, can someone proofread this and let me know what my weaknesses are on my thoughts or sentence structure. Based on the article I read I believe that the bases of wars are a result of people’s lack of understanding, appreciation, and respect for other people’s ...
February 3, 2008

Sentence structure
can I say aristocrats instead?
January 21, 2008

Sentence structure
1)Voltaire presents his ideas of injustice through comedy by exaggerating the aristocrats’ life style. In this sentence do I include an "s" after style? Also, which is correct in this sentence, "life style" or "lifestyle". 2)Voltaire’s ...
January 21, 2008

sentence stucture
Thank you both for your help! I appreciate it. =)
January 19, 2008

sentence stucture
4) Indigenous caregivers are people couples can go to for help when they need immediate assistance. Where it says "people couples" to me it sounds odd. How can I make it sound better? 5) For example, a teacher or doctor can help provide certain resources the couples ...
January 19, 2008

sentence stucture
3)Married couples who do not have compatible personalities may risk having more emotional problems and divorce is usually the result of emotional problems. Should I delete "of emotional problems" at the end of this sentence to make it sound better?
January 19, 2008

sentence stucture
I'm not sure if my example is a good one? I am saying the social factor in this example is age? Am I right? I don't want to be wrong and use this as an example to my argument. For instance, studies have shown that teenagers who get married as a means to escape from ...
January 19, 2008

sentence stucture
Hello, I'm trying to proofread my 8 page paper and I have come up with some uncertainties about some of my sentence structure. These are the some of the sentences I am not sure are correct or perhaps needs improvement. 1)People most often look for social, emotional, ...
January 19, 2008

English
Thank you that helps a lot because I wasn't sure if comparing marriage to a class was a good idea. Thanks for proofreading the beginning part of my essay.
January 19, 2008

English
According to Jeff Lewis, individuals need know themselves first before going through the mate selection process. Individuals need to know what their needs are in a relationship. They also need to know if marriage is something they want to pursue. They need to know what their ...
January 19, 2008

English (read this 2nd)
Hi, I sent you my previous rough draft of this paragraph. You can ignore that one because I edit it and added more to it. People are usually looking for someone to compliment their style, beliefs, and interests. For example, a person may probably look for someone who has the ...
January 19, 2008

English
People are usually looking for someone to compliment each others' style, beliefs, and interests. For instance, a person may probably look for someone who has the same cultural background as them. They may also consider looking for similarities in the types of values they ...
January 19, 2008

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