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August 29, 2015

Homework Help: English: Writing

Recent Homework Questions About Writing

English
Can you check if there's grammar mistakes in this monologue, if there is, can you correct it for me. Hi, I'm William Shakespeare. I had disappeared from the records for seven years. Many rumors flew around, including that I liked to poach. They say I had to leave ...
Monday, February 17, 2014 by Tommy

English
Can you read this essay first, and then tell me how I should block the scene and perform it, I have no idea how I should do this. Hi, I'm William Shakespeare. I had disappeared from the records for seven years. Many rumors flew around, including that I liked to poach. They...
Sunday, February 16, 2014 by Tommy

English-help me please
Can you change the hard English words to easy ones and make the long sentences a little bit short for me? I have to memorize it and perform it, so I need this monologue to be easier. Monologue:Shakespeare's relationship with Robert Greene For seven years, I was disappeared...
Sunday, February 16, 2014 by Tommy

Health/Writing
So I'm writing a story about a guy who gets brain tumor because of a car accident. I know it may be a stupid question, but how can someone retrieve tumor in such a situation? Or where can radiation, enough to give cancer, be found. Maybe a place or a truck or something ...
Saturday, February 15, 2014 by Ella

English help
I'm writing an expository essay about a "perfect mate" how should I write my thesis statement?
Wednesday, February 12, 2014 by Anonymous

english
need help with writing a five-sentence paragraph using chronological order on signing on to my homepage is simple
Tuesday, February 11, 2014 by tony

english
I MUST A DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY OF 350 WORDS AND MY TOPIC IS A YOUR DREAM HOUSE IN RUBRIC FORMAT, I DO NOT KNOW WHERE TO START AND HOW TO GO ABOUT WRITING THIS ESSAY, PLEASE HELP, PLEASE HELP.
Tuesday, February 11, 2014 by PETER

writing and linear equations
the measure of one angle is described as twelve more than four times a number. its supplement is twice as large. find the measure of each angle.
Monday, February 10, 2014 by mari

Writing
I'm not sure how to develop a good plot about some kind of fantasy-like war without making it seem like I'm copying someone, or without making it so complex to the point where I don't know how to write it. Are there any good tips on making sure you come up with a ...
Monday, February 10, 2014 by Me

writing
When you are in school, almost any Subject seems a potential area for a good job. what correction should be made in this sentence? 1)replace you are with one is 2)remove the comma after school 3)change Subject to subject 4)insert a comma after area 5)no correction necessary
Monday, February 10, 2014 by Antoinette

Grammar
Is this grammatically correct? "Writing—Novel Response #1."
Monday, February 10, 2014 by Anonymous

english
need a help on writing a poster .
Sunday, February 9, 2014 by goodman

Quick English help
So I'm writing an essay about explaining why people should speak up and address issues that matter in the world today but I don't know what to say in each pargraph. (4 paragraphs) could someone help me?!? Thanks so much!!!
Saturday, February 8, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing Evaluation (Writeacher!)
What do you think? Have I written according to the directions? What improvements do you suggest? Write 2 paragraphs describing Annie Johnson's sitation ("New Directions" by Maya Angelou.) A: Annie Johnson’s situation shows the familiar struggle that many ...
Wednesday, February 5, 2014 by Anonymous

english/writing
does my thesis statement make sense? is it clear? any suggestions are welcomed In "The Love Song of J Alfred Prufrock," T.S. Eliot used Prufrock to symbolize modern man's fruitless struggle to find self-worth, love, and insecurities of owns appearance. thank you! :D
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Anon

Anatomy and Physiology
. A 32-year-old man has trouble tying his shoelaces, writing, and walking in a straight line. A computed tomographic (special x-ray) scan of the brain would likely reveal that the man has an abnormality in the A. cerebellum. B. brain stem. C. diencephalon. D. cerebrum.
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Diana

english(check answers)
which of these sentences shows correct comma usage? A.Yes i enjoy writing poetry in my spare time.(I PICK THIS) B.After,a while,i suppose,the boy became less scared of the new girl. C.By the end of the first stanza,i had guessed that the new kid was a girl.(I PICKED THIS) D....
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Mark

english(check answers)
please check answers 7.which of these sentences shows correct comma usage? A.Yes i enjoy writing poetry in my spare time.(I PICK THIS) B.After,a while,i suppose,the boy became less scared of the new girl. C.By the end of the first stanza,i had guessed that the new kid was a ...
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Mark

english(2 Qs)
please answer these 2 questions. please 7..which of these sentences shows correct comma usage? A.Yes i enjoy writing poetry in my spare time. B.After,a while,i suppose,the boy became less scared of the new girl. C.By the end of the first stanza,i had guessed that the new kid ...
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Mark

Writing
Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (To see that it's italicized, I quoted it in *) A. The article called "A Persistent Rebel" in *American History* magazine told about Elizabeth Blackwell. B. The article called *A Persistent Rebel* in *American History* ...
Tuesday, February 4, 2014 by Sam

Research Report
I'm doing a research report about the Stonehenge. My thesis is that even though the Stonehenge is so mysterious, it is still a wonderful piece of history. Currently, I'm writing the outline, and this asks me to write topic sentences for each of my three paragraphs. I ...
Monday, February 3, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing Evaluation (Writeacher!)
What do you think? Does this paragraph require any improvements? What do you suggest? Should I include more? Write a paragraph describing Rosa Park's courage. What I have written: Rosa Parks was an African-American woman who, at the age of 42, had the courage to say "...
Monday, February 3, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing Evaluation (Writeacher!)
What do you think? Do these paragraphs require any improvements? What do you suggest? 1. Write a paragraph discussing the courage demonstrated by Martin Luther King Jr. What I have written: Throughout the nation, Martin Luther King, Jr. is remembered as a man of exceptional ...
Monday, February 3, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing (Writeacher!)
These paragraphs must consist of at least four sentences, but I have only written one for each of them. Can you assist me in writing the others? 1. Write a paragraph discussing the courage demonstrated by Martin Luther King Jr. What I have written: Willing to risk his life and...
Sunday, February 2, 2014 by Anonymous

English
I am doing descriptive writing I am currently constructing a weather scene, which is a bad rainy day. This will end up building more tension to my story. Here is what I got so far... Out the window next to me, the rain was pouring heavily, from the overcast of thick clouds. ...
Sunday, February 2, 2014 by Anonymous

English
I am writing a paper for my research class and I am not sure I am using the right word in the sentence below. (This can include mental, physical, and emotional abuse that any member of a family conflicts on to another member of the family.) I am not sure that “conflicts&#...
Thursday, January 30, 2014 by AT

English
I am doing descriptive writing. Please read and check my story I need help to write a solid interesting ending. The Unexpected I’m in a hospital bed with my mum gripping her hand onto mine. All I have endured is an extensive amount of excruciating agony of aching pain, ...
Thursday, January 30, 2014 by Anonymous

English
I am doing descriptive writing how can i describe a shooting scene in a school? it needs to be detailed, chaotic and interesting
Thursday, January 30, 2014 by Anonymous

English
I am writing a description of a boring teacher Here is what I have so far Miss Tedious (the most lacklustre teacher ever) was talking algebraic garbage but her voice just seemed a blur. Her eyes seemed to sag with an expression of dullness and lack of life. Her mouth moved ...
Wednesday, January 29, 2014 by Anonymous

writing
i need help finding mistakes in this paragraph my teacher said there's 9 can you help me find it? The assignment is to First correct it the mistakes in the paragraph. than re- wright it the passage correctly in cursive. I'll show you, Yesterday was the death a vary ...
Wednesday, January 29, 2014 by Gila

writing
I would like to write about the death of my brother but I need to come up with a thesis and I am suck on that can you please help me
Tuesday, January 28, 2014 by Shawn

Writing Evaluation (Writeacher)
Should I revise anything? In my opinion, the use of “scary things” as entertainment is redundant. I mean, honestly, what on earth is so enjoyable about fear? Fear is what haunts us and frightened us even as young children. Yes, we are taught to face it, to not fear ...
Tuesday, January 28, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing Evaluation (Writeacher)
Should I revise anything? "I don't possess many memories that consist of baseball, as I have never watched an actual game or played the sport. However, when I think about it, the film The Sandlot, a 1993 American coming-of-age film directed by David M. Evans, which ...
Tuesday, January 28, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing and solving equations
The number of green balls is g. The number of red balls is 3 more than the number of green balls, and the number of blue balls is 7 more that the number of green balls. If the number of blue balls is 18, how many green balls are there?
Monday, January 27, 2014 by Anonymous

Ms.Sue is this better?
In the article The String Theory, by David Foster Wallace, there were three writing techniques that I noticed Wallace used. First, I think Wallace was informative and explanatory. He explained why there are some professional tennis players who are unknown and obscure to the ...
Monday, January 27, 2014 by Blaze

Writing (Writeacher and Ms. Sue)
Write a description of a scene in the story "The Birds" by Daphne Du Maurier as it would look to a bird flying overhead. What do you think? I wrote the description about the scene when the birds are entering the house through the chimney. "The bright flames rose...
Monday, January 27, 2014 by Anonymous

Analysis proofreading
Hi for my analysis on The String Theory by David Wallace Foster I had to discuss 3 writing techniques the author used and give an example. Can I please get it proofread? After reading the article The String Theory, by David Foster Wallace, there were three writing techniques ...
Monday, January 27, 2014 by Blaze

Writing--Can someone please help me with this?
Write a description of a scene in the story "The Birds" by Daphne Du Maurier as it would look to a bird flying overhead.
Monday, January 27, 2014 by Anonymous

ela
I'm writing an essay about an author using a specific literary device to prove their purpose. Is indirect/direct characterization a literary device?
Sunday, January 26, 2014 by amy

english
state the distinguishing features of literary writing by citing examples and discussing them
Sunday, January 26, 2014 by Anonymous

English
how to describe a shooting scene in writing?
Thursday, January 23, 2014 by Anonymous

Math
I'm a 5th grader and I'm having a hard time writing the above fractions in order. They are 3/10, 1, 1/4, 5/8, 2/3, 1/8, 5/6, 3/4, 0, 1/6, 7/8, 1/3? Am I suppose to find the least common denominator first?
Wednesday, January 22, 2014 by Theresa

English
I am writing a story and it is about this maths teacher who is really annoying. she is teaching the class. what dialogue can I use to put in my story which makes the class get even more bored?
Wednesday, January 22, 2014 by Anonymous

English
In this example I need to say 1. Choose a term or phrase to describe the type of writing at issue. 2. What's the social purposes that motivate writing 3. Comment on how the form and content of each passage are related to the various social situations. With a love and ...
Wednesday, January 22, 2014 by Mohammad

Ed tech
Which of the following describes a way of memorizing a poem using a mnemonic device? reading every line of a poem several times until you have it memorized singing the words of the poem to the tune of "Happy Birthday" creating a poster that displays the poem writing ...
Wednesday, January 22, 2014 by Princess Anna

Multicultural Dimenstions
I am writing an essay on Prejudice and Discrimination. I cannot come up with an introduction. I have a quote and one line so far. "Do you know what we call opinions in the absence of evidence? We call it Prejudice"- Michael Crichton Prejudice and discrimination have ...
Saturday, January 18, 2014 by Cathy

Writing (Writeacher)
Re-edit: I don't mind competition, expect to the extent that I can become overly ambitious and often lose my ability to think clearly. For example, when I was younger, I used to cheat while playing Chutes and Ladders merely for the sake of winning. Only then, I didn't ...
Saturday, January 18, 2014 by Anonymous

Language arts
Im writing a research paper on the 2005 congressional baseball act, but i cant find any information that i can understand, I know that at the time teenagers were using steroids then committing suicide but am I missing anything?
Saturday, January 18, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing (Writeacher and/or Ms. Sue)
Have I followed the instructions accurately? Also, do either of you suggest that my writing requires any improvements? "Write several paragraphs on your experience and feeling about competition. Is it more fun to chase or be chased?" What I have written: "I, ...
Friday, January 17, 2014 by Anonymous

math
Writing to explain: The digit 5 is usually rounded up, but it can also be rounded down. How would you round the numbers in the equation 9.5 +4.7+3.2+7.5= to the nearest whole number without getting an overestimate or an underestimate?
Friday, January 17, 2014 by Jess

Writing
what is a good opening sentence to a short story? no matter what genre im writing? plz help me. from a girls point of view.
Thursday, January 16, 2014 by Megan

science/writing
How are stink bugs harmful to crops?
Thursday, January 16, 2014 by Ashley

Test-Taking Strategies
Please check my answers! Please Check if they are wrong please tell me! Thanks! Only 2 questions! 1: Which of the following is a good way to approach answering an essay question and a test? a.) Start writing your answer as soon as you have read the question. b.) Jot down a ...
Thursday, January 16, 2014 by Cindy

Business-Need help!
1. Regarding Mexico's Porfirio Díaz, which statement is true? A. He enacted laws that favored wealthy elites. B. He overthrew the Mexican Revolution of 1910. C. He freed many peasant farmers from debt peonage. D. He reformed the hacienda system. 2. In the 1840s, the...
Wednesday, January 15, 2014 by Sarah

Language Arts 8th Connection Academy
Scott’s Good-bye We saw the months of wicked weather, As day to painful night did turn, Waiting, huddled close together For the frozen sun’s return. Our nights were almost endless torture. Our food was gone. Our fuel was low. We came in search of grand adventure But ...
Monday, January 13, 2014 by mtv

Writing?!
does anyone know good realistic fiction topics and conflicts? i love writing but have a hard time with this genre because everything has to be able to occur in real life. :( im better at fake stuff. So plz plz help me!
Monday, January 13, 2014 by Megan

Novel Help
I have to write a realistic fiction story for my creative writing class does anybody have any ideas?????
Monday, January 13, 2014 by Mary Ann

English 3
I need help writing a good strong thesis statement for my research paper. Im doing my paper over the different conspiracy theories people have on the "sandy hook" school shooting...please help me
Monday, January 13, 2014 by Ivory Wright

Creative Writing check answer
The writing process for multimedia writing: (Points : 3) is the same process used in writing poetry or fiction but without the revision step is the same process used in writing poetry or fiction is the same process used in writing poetry or fiction but without the generative ...
Sunday, January 12, 2014 by JANIECE

Writing
I'm doing a writing on why school sports should stay and not be banned. What is a good hooking sentence?
Sunday, January 12, 2014 by Celest

Writing
This isn't exactly a homework question, but it's something I've seen in books recently, and it's bothering me. The way I've been taught, it's grammatically incorrect, and my teacher agrees; however, she says she's been seeing it in a lot of recent ...
Sunday, January 12, 2014 by Me

Academic Excellence
Goal setting: A. is only important in online learning. B. gives direction and standards for achieving one’s purpose. C. is keeping in mind what you want to do. D. is simply writing what you want to achieve and then put it away.
Sunday, January 12, 2014 by vrunda

writing thesis statments
I am stuck on what would be a good thesis statement for my topic of, " How does drug addiction affect America as a whole?
Saturday, January 11, 2014 by ashley

Statistic
Consider a football team for whom the numbers on the active players’ jerseys are 29, 41, 50, 58, 79,…, 10 (listed in alphabetical order of the players’ names). Does it make sense to calculate the mean of those numbers? Why or why not? 2. The Fair Isaac ...
Saturday, January 11, 2014 by Lori

writing
Emma is a leader in (who, whom) we have great confidence.
Saturday, January 11, 2014 by Anonymous

Proofreading
tomorrow is my friend's birthday and she's turning 15 so I'm writing her a birthday card and I was wondering if I did any mistakes (I'm going to now write it on the card). Happy Birthday Sarah, You were definitely one of the few people in SMS who managed to ...
Friday, January 10, 2014 by anon

English
What does it mean to write a reflective piece? Just writing an essay?
Thursday, January 9, 2014 by Me

Education Tech
1.) Which of the following is the best strategy for studying test? a) Sitting alone in a chair in a quiet room, looking over your textbook. b) Working in pairs and exchanging practice questions. c) Developing a personal method that is right for you and your learning style. d) ...
Thursday, January 9, 2014 by Ashley mccgarvey

Need help asap
I need help! Reasoning: Can a function have an infinite number of values in its domain and only a finite number of values in its range? If so, describe a real-world situation that could be modeled by such a function. Writing: What is the difference between a relation and a ...
Thursday, January 9, 2014 by Macie

Math
Part 1: When writing linear equations, how do you determine which form of a line to use? Part 2: Choose 1 set of points from the choices below. Then, solve the problem and post your solution, showing your steps. Write an equation in point-slope form for the line that passes ...
Wednesday, January 8, 2014 by Katie

writing
Which of the following is a complex sentence? A. I would like to visit the Kinshasa, but I understand the city is unsafe for foreigners. B. Check out the editorial page in today's paper and you'll notice the piece by Oscar Lewis. C. I simply cannot make heads or tails ...
Wednesday, January 8, 2014 by KERIA

oops, more LA than i thought..pls check my answers
oops, more questions... pls check them for me!??: 1. If you were writing a persuasive essay about the need to install solar panels on top of big apartment buildings, what counterargument should you address? (1 point) homeowners can get tax breaks for installing solar panels on...
Tuesday, January 7, 2014 by TTR+S<3

Writing
I've come across a problem while writing my story: since it doesn't take place in modern times - actually, it's more or less a fantasy story - I'm having a hard time creating clothes for my characters. I know that since it's a fantasy, it allows for a lot ...
Saturday, January 4, 2014 by Me

Language Arts
Anybody out there from 7th grade connections academy??! need help checking my answers!!: 1. The author's tone in this editorial is (1 point) sad humorous compassionate angry 2. What is the key phrase used to signal a comparison or contrast in the following statement? "...
Saturday, January 4, 2014 by TTR+S<3

writing
I am trying to set up and write an essay on the subject of "Perception" I have my outline and have written what I need just don't know how to set it up and make it run together
Saturday, January 4, 2014 by Cathy

Civics/writing
Can someone please help me with a sentence? this is what i have so far~ We were inspired to use the Miranda rights as our topic when in school learning about rights and responsibilities.*****sentence I need help with****.
Saturday, January 4, 2014 by Anonymous

Writing
I'm writing a story from the point of view of an assassin. I'm comfortable with writing the parts about killing and all of that other stuff, but I have no idea how to go about this assassin's main job: tracking. How can he track down a person (in a world where ...
Wednesday, January 1, 2014 by Me

Wriitng
What would be the reaction of a teenage daughter after rescuing her parents after their kidnap? so this is for a story I'm writing. basically, my main character finds her parents and is finally there after a lot of hard work and struggle. she's seen a lot of things she...
Monday, December 30, 2013 by Ella

Creative Writing
Write a small paragraph on any one of the topic..... 1. Greatness comes with sacrifice 2. There is science in every art 3. Religion ennobles a human being 4. Musicians are born and not created
Sunday, December 29, 2013 by Juhi

math
I'm not understanding and writing the following proportion: 8 is to 64 as 2 is to x, can somebody explain how to solve this problem.
Saturday, December 28, 2013 by cora evans

office finances
when writing a check which portion should be filled in first s.date b.stub c.amount d.signature my answer is a
Saturday, December 28, 2013 by susue

Writing
I just want an opinion here. I've been writing for about ten years, and I've improved greatly. Though, now I'm beginning to feel like I've reached a standstill. I still read a lot to expand my knowledge and vocabulary, and I bounce back and forth between ...
Tuesday, December 24, 2013 by Me

Writing - Verb confusion
I'm having a hard time going with this sentence here, because I'm not sure which verb I should use...or if I should just reword the whole sentence...? "I won't hit you because scum like you (isn't, aren't, or something else...?) worth my time."
Tuesday, December 24, 2013 by Me

Writing
what would be another way to phrase "i'm on a rollercoaster that only goes up". like is there another metaphorical or symbolic sentence like it which we can say. just to erase some confusion--i'm talking about using other words that portray the same meaning. ...
Friday, December 20, 2013 by Ella

English
We are writing this Character Analysis and I am stuck on how the author's personality affects him towards others. His Personality is selfishness/Shy/worthless.
Wednesday, December 18, 2013 by Catheline-Anne Marie

need help so bad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm writing a response to literature for the story Nadia the Willful and I was wondering how this sounded. And I need a quote from the story for paragraph 3 what would be a good quote. Coping with death isn’t easy in fact death of a loved one is one of my number one ...
Wednesday, December 18, 2013 by josiah

language arts
I'm writing a response to literature for the story Nadia the Willful and I was wondering how this sounded. And I need a quote from the story for paragraph 3 what would be a good quote. Coping with death isn’t easy in fact death of a loved one is one of my number one ...
Tuesday, December 17, 2013 by josiah

English - help
Ms. Kemp Recruits Volunteers As a new ninth grader at my high school, I was sitting in an assembly about volunteerism.The guest speaker was Ms. Francis Kemp. Today I had an experience worth writing about. I must admit that I did not have high hopes for the hour. I was sure it ...
Tuesday, December 17, 2013 by Cassie

Writing
We have to pick a song we really like and break it apart to write a story on it. Well, my favorite song is actually fairly easy to break apart, I guess, but I just want to see what else you might pick up from it? Here are the lyrics, and I apologize for any errors. I typed ...
Sunday, December 15, 2013 by Me

8th Grade Writing
That's great! that was my main idea but how would he be able to get the money from his brother anyway? so far i have made it so that the guy kidnaps his brother and his brother's wife. the daughters going to save them but how would he take the money?
Saturday, December 14, 2013 by Karina

8th Grade Writing
Hello, I'm writing a story adn was wondering if someone could give me realistic reasons as to why a brother would kidnap hid brother? thats kind of what happenes in my story. the brothers are like 50 years old though. thank you!
Saturday, December 14, 2013 by Karina

math
I need help writing 57/18 as a mixed number. Can somebody show me how to do it .Because I'm not understanding what to do.
Friday, December 13, 2013 by cora evans

the parts of speech
1. Write the verb "see" in the present perfect tense. Use the pronoun "I" as the subject. A. I am seeing. B. I am seen. C. I have seen. D. I see. A? 2. Which kind of adjective is used most frequently in ordinary speech or writing? A. Proper B. Common C. ...
Friday, December 13, 2013 by Beatrice

Business English
I need help writing this: You’ve applied for a specific job in your field of study. The Human Resources Department arranges an interview and tells you to bring with you a polished piece of writing for them to evaluate your writing skills. The paragraph must describe one ...
Thursday, December 12, 2013 by Kelley

writing skills
A clause from sentence (i) has been turned into a(n) _______ in sentence (ii). (i) Since she knew what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. (ii) Knowing what the lecture was about, she didn't attend the meeting. A. relative pronoun B. infinitive C. ...
Wednesday, December 11, 2013 by josh

English (HELP)
I need an example of a regular writing scene portfolio and of a dramatic writing scene portfolio??????
Monday, December 9, 2013 by Bobbye

English
Are the pronouns I put down right? My answers are the ones in parentheses 1. The trip led to an argument between Helen and _____. (I) 2. It was ____ who demanded an apology from the newspaper. (us) 3. We appreciated ____ writing a personal letter to explain his stand on the ...
Monday, December 9, 2013 by Mayra

math
Tom Schriber, a director of personnel of Management resources, Inc. is in the process of designing a program that its customers can use in the job finding process. Some of the activites include preparing resumes, writing letters, making appointments to see prospective ...
Sunday, December 8, 2013 by kae

Comp and communication
What are 200 words to explain the importance of purpose,audience,tone,and content in academic writing?
Friday, December 6, 2013 by Chaka

English
1.the trip led to an argument between Helen and ____ a.I b.me 2. It was ____ who demanded an apology from the newspaper. a.we b.us 3. We appreciated ____ writing a personal letter to explain his stand on the issue. a.his b.him 4. The most outspoken critics were my sister and ...
Friday, December 6, 2013 by Ray

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