Which revision to sentence 4 contains an example of vivid description?

Sentence 4: The map was confusing

A)The number of colorful crisscrossing paths on the map made Sal's eyes glaze over

B)The map looked completely baffling***

C)Even when she turned the map around, it was difficult to read

D) The map looked hard to read

It was A ://

I disagree. There's a much better answer.

Yes, you're correct

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I agree with Ms. Sue.

The revision that contains an example of vivid description is option A) "The number of colorful crisscrossing paths on the map made Sal's eyes glaze over."

To determine the correct answer, we need to identify the option that adds vivid description to sentence 4. In this case, we are looking for an option that provides more details and helps the reader visualize the confusing nature of the map.

Option A captures this by including the detail of "colorful crisscrossing paths" and the effect it has on Sal's eyes, which "glaze over." This description helps create a vivid image of the complexity and overwhelming nature of the map.