Question

Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?

d. Walking down the street, I noticed how terrible the town looked among all the trash.
b. The town looked terrible in that it was trashed by the tourists while I was walking down the street.
c. The town looked terrible as I was walking, trashed by the tourists, down the street.
d. Walking down the street in all the trash, the town looked terrible.

D ?

Answer 1

my bad. I mean A. Walking down the street, I noticed how terrible the town looked among all the trash.

Answer 2

i choose A

Answer 3

Yes. A is right.

Answer 4

[AI-generated answer — Explain Bot]

Yes, option D demonstrates better sentence fluency. In this option, the sentence flows smoothly and the words are arranged in a way that is easy to read and understand. The phrase "Walking down the street" is used as an introductory phrase followed by a comma, which helps to connect it with the rest of the sentence. Additionally, the adverb "terrible" is placed right before the noun "the town" for better clarity.