Hey Reed u told me u will check my essay and u didn't check it so i posting in this post! PLZ remove the last post which was Yesterday cause I posted my essay there and after u check let me know. Plz don't remove this until I reply so I can see ur reply! Thanks a bunch.

Did you know that you can text and call from an iPhone, but you can only do it with an iPod with WI-Fi! That is not so cool, so check out an iPhone. An iPhone is usually as small as an iPod, so they both are portable. It is easy to carry them around, but an iPhone can be used to call and text from anywhere and everywhere, but an iPod cannot. To use an iPod you always need WI-Fi.
An iPod and an iPhone share lots of similarities, like they both are portable. It’s easy to take both of them everywhere. Both are a handy tool. People can use them whenever and everywhere. You can play games and take pics. Another similarity they share is that they both need charge to work. You should charge them when it has like a little battery so it does not mess up. Another similarity is that they both come in a variety of colors. There is from white to red. They all look nice.
However, there are some differences between and iPod and an iPhone. One difference is that for an iPhone you don’t need internet in order to text and call people, it’s like a regular phone. For an iPod you have to have WI-Fi do call or text. Another difference is the cost. The cost of the iPhone is high, but it is worth it. That aside, a camera on an iPhone is clearer than an iPod. It has a more visual effect on the picture. There are more differences that everyone should be aware of, so make the correct choice!
In conclusion, an iPhone has much more variety than an iPod, the way it’s made and the features. They both also are portable. An iPhone can be used as a real, regular phone, whereas an iPod cannot be used as a phone until there is WI-Fi. There are more similarities such as they come in many colors. A difference is that the cost is different. An iPhone cost more, but it has more varieties in the apps and stuff. So make the right choice before picking your iPhone or iPod!

First, I'm sorry I didn't see your first post. I was away from home for several hours yesterday.

Your essay is, basically, okay. A few suggestions:

Your last sentence makes it sound like a commercial, not an essay. Your t-to-last sentence might be a good ending. But the "and stuff" is so non-specific. You need to be more specific. And you have not mentioned apps before. You need to elaborate on the idea that apps make the iPhone more versatile than an iPod.

Keep an eye on slangy speech here, which is not appropriate in more formal writing. "lots of similarities, like the both are portable." End your sentence at "similarities." Then "They are both portable." becomes a separate sentence. Look for other things like that as you revise your draft. And you repeat, later, that both are portable. That is a redundant statement in that you've already made the point. Watch for things like that, too.

Generally, I think you're on the right track! Good work so far, but you can make it better. :)

Thank You thank You so much! I will fix them! Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I apologize for the confusion, but as an AI text-based bot, I am unable to directly check or review your essay. However, I can provide you with some general feedback and suggestions.

Overall, your essay compares an iPhone and an iPod, highlighting their similarities and differences. To improve your essay, consider the following:

1. Introduction: It is good that you start with an attention-grabbing statement, but try to provide more context or background information about the topic in order to engage the reader.

2. Organization: Your essay lacks a clear structure. Consider dividing your essay into paragraphs to address different points or aspects of the comparison, such as design, functionality, cost, and variety.

3. Comparison Points: Expand on the similarities and differences between the iPhone and iPod. Provide specific examples and details to support your statements. Additionally, consider discussing aspects such as software capabilities, storage capacities, and usability.

4. Language and Clarity: Proofread your essay to fix any grammatical errors or unclear sentences. Make sure your ideas are well-expressed and easy to understand.

Once you have revised your essay, I recommend seeking feedback from a teacher, friend, or family member, as they can provide you with more personalized guidance. Good luck!