Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors.
I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
My Answer
I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun.
You still have a run-on in there. Where should you divide this into 2 sentences?
Well, wait!
In addition to dividing this into two complete sentences, you also need to do something about the strange phrasing. This doesn't make sense to me: "it teaches me... "
What is "it"?
To revise the word groups to remove all fragments and/or parallelism errors, you can make the following changes:
Original: I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
Revised: I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
In this case, the original sentence is already grammatically correct, and there are no fragments or parallelism errors. However, you can make a minor change by removing the repetition of "it" in the revised sentence to make it more concise, like this:
Revised: I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport.
Note that the use of "it's" in your proposed answer "I like baseball, it teaches me about the sport and it’s also fun" is incorrect, as "it's" is a contraction for "it is," while the sentence requires the possessive pronoun "its."