Review and revise the following paragraph:
After reviewing al the pleadings the underlining records the party arguments; pertinent caselaw and statutes and the other recommendations filed byt eh party’s, this court remains of the opinion and view point that the decision is null and void eeven though the attorneys of record attempt to argue otherwise. Because this court has not found no case law directly on the point of the subject before this Coourt, the court will find for the Plaintiffs and not the defendant”s in this matter.
Reviewed:
After reviewing all the pleadings, the underlining records of the party arguments; pertinent case law, statutes and the other recommendations filed by the parties, this court remains of the opinion and view point that the decision is null and void; Even though, the attorneys of record attempts to argue otherwise. Because this court has found no case law directly on the point of the subject before this Court, the court will find for the Plaintiffs and not the defendants in this matter.
I am wondering how I should write "even though." Should I put a period after void and capitalize E? And period after though or continue as is: null and void even though without comma after though and non punctuation between void and even. Please help me here.
Leave it as is. No comma after "even though". And no "s" on "attempt." :)
So "null and void even though the attorney"
like that ??
Yes.
Here is the revised version of the paragraph:
"After reviewing all the pleadings, the underlying records, the party arguments, pertinent case law, statutes, and the other recommendations filed by the parties, this court remains of the opinion and viewpoint that the decision is null and void. Even though the attorneys of record attempt to argue otherwise, this court has found no case law directly on the point of the subject before this court. Therefore, the court will find for the plaintiffs and not the defendants in this matter."
To answer your specific questions:
- You should put a period after "void" to end the sentence.
- "Even though" should be capitalized as it is the beginning of a new sentence.
- "Though" doesn't require a comma after it.
- There should be a period after "matter" to end the paragraph.
When revising, it's important to break up long sentences and use appropriate punctuation to improve clarity and readability.