I would like someone to revise this for me. Thanks!

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Ever since I can remember I have lived in Philadelphia. I have many nice memories from Philadelphia, and I am fortunate enough to have a relatively normal life without having to experience pain of suffering.
The first memory I have is from kindergarten, at Fox Chase Elementary. I remember that a girl in my class who lived quite close to me said that her dad got her a baby kitten, as she said “It was the cutest thing she had ever seen”! This cat comes along in my life 7 years later, so not quite yet. I told my mom that day about it, and I was able to go over there and play with the kitten and the girl. And I could agree, as I still do, that she is the cutest thing in the world.
Any way, the next event in my life was when I was 12. It involves the cat. I saw her on the street. She was very loving, and came up to me rubbing against my leg. It seemed as if though she remembered me, and I definitely remembered her. The girl who owned her had moved a very long time before I saw her. She moved to Florida so I think they may have abandoned her. My mother graciously allowed me to take her in, and I gave her the nickname Moo as her real name was Mishu. I found her on September 29th 2013. I remember because it was 5 days before she inflicted another amazing incident upon my life.
I thought she was just slightly chubby, but on October 4th 2014, she gave birth to 4 kittens. I remember feeling nothing but affection and love for these 4 noisily nursing kittens. My mother gave me the best present in the world and said that if I took good care of them I could keep all 4. I invested as much time as I could in them while still maintaining good grades. I was there for them throughout everything. I witnessed them opening their eyes, eating their first can of food, and taking their first steps. Everything up until now. Now they are not the little kittens on the outside but on the inside, they will always be my little babies.
As you can see, I am very fortunate to have been able to live a life without anything to make it difficult or to inflict a single ounce of pain in it. I will be forever grateful to many people for many things. But throughout whatever will happen, I will be forever most grateful to my mom for giving me some of the best experiences in my life.

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Sure, I'd be happy to revise your writing for you! Here is the revised version:

Ever since I can remember, I have lived in Philadelphia. I have many fond memories from my time in Philadelphia, and I am grateful that my life has been relatively pain-free.

One of my earliest memories is from kindergarten at Fox Chase Elementary. I recall a girl in my class who lived nearby telling us about her new baby kitten. She described it as the cutest thing she had ever seen. Although I couldn't have the kitten at that time, I was able to visit and play with it. I agreed with the girl's assessment - the kitten was indeed adorable.

The next significant event in my life occurred when I was 12 and involved that same cat. I came across her on the street, and it seemed like she remembered me too. The girl who used to own her had moved away long ago, possibly abandoning her. Thankfully, my mother kindly allowed me to take her in, and I affectionately named her Moo. I found her on September 29th, 2013, which was five days before she brought even more joy into my life.

To my surprise, Moo gave birth to four kittens on October 4th, 2014. I felt an overwhelming sense of affection and love for these noisy little creatures. My mother gave me the most wonderful gift by allowing me to keep all four kittens as long as I took good care of them. I dedicated as much time as possible to them while still maintaining my school grades. I witnessed their growth and development, from opening their eyes to eating their first can of food and taking their first steps. They will forever be my little babies, even as they grow older.

As you can see, I consider myself extremely fortunate to have had a relatively pain-free life. I am forever grateful to the many people who have made my life experiences memorable, but above all, I am grateful to my mother for providing me with some of the best moments in my life.