Posted by paul on .
Please help me to correct my English grammar. thank you.
June 17, 2014
Good day, I regret when I resigned from your company but it’s my family’s reason. I am now presently working here in Maldives as a professional photographer and salesman as well. I realized that you have the best company I had ever worked and having a good manager like you understanding always in every situation to all your staff.
I would like to apply again in your company if I still have an opportunity to work with your organization. If I’ll be given a chance to join in your company then I can fly direct to Doha Qatar anytime next month as long as I have a job offer from your company and hopefully you will give me a second chance to work with your company and it would be a great gratitude to you in my whole life.
Thank you very much for your kind always and looking forward to receiving a reply from you.
English please help me -
I regret that I resigned from your company, but I had to do so for family reasons. I am presently working here in Maldives as a professional photographer and salesman, but I believe yours is the best company I have ever worked for. Good managers like you, who is very understanding for all your staff, are hard to find.
I wish to apply to work for your company again if I still have an opportunity to do so. I can fly directly to Doha Qatar anytime next month if I have a job offer from your company. I hope you will give me a second chance to work for you. I would be very grateful.
Thank you very much for your kindness. I look forward to receiving a reply from you.