How do I make this more positive?

Dear renter:

Effective march 1, the rent for your parking space will go up $10 a month. However, our parking lot is still not the most expensive in town.

Many of you have asked us to provide better snow and ice removal and to post signs saying that all spaces are rented so that a car can be towed if it parked in your space. Signs will be posted by March 1, and, if we get any more snow, Acme Company has contracted to have the lot cleared by 7 a.m.

Enclosed is a new parking sticker. Please hang it on your rear view mirror.

Sincerely,
A.E. Jackson

Lead off with the positives.

End with the rent increase.

Dear renter,

We have some exciting updates to share with you regarding your parking space! Starting from March 1, there will be a slight increase of $10 in the monthly rent. We understand that this may cause concern, but it's important to note that our parking lot remains one of the most affordable options in town.

We have been actively listening to your feedback and are thrilled to inform you that improvements are underway. Many of you have voiced the need for enhanced snow and ice removal, as well as greater enforcement of rented spaces. With your convenience in mind, we have planned to have signs installed by March 1, ensuring that any vehicle occupying your designated spot will be towed promptly. Furthermore, we have partnered with Acme Company to guarantee that even in snowy conditions, the parking lot will be cleared by 7 a.m.

In preparation for these changes, we have included a new parking sticker for your convenience. Simply hang it on your rearview mirror to ensure seamless access to your parking space.

Thank you for your understanding and continued support. We are committed to creating a positive parking experience for all our valued renters.

Sincerely,
A.E. Jackson

To make this message more positive, you can focus on highlighting the benefits and positive changes for the renters. Here's an example of how you can reword the message:

Dear valued renter,

We have some exciting news to share with you regarding our parking space rentals! Starting March 1, there will be a small adjustment of $10 per month in the rent for your parking space. We believe this update will allow us to provide even better services and improvements to enhance your parking experience.

In response to your valuable feedback, we have taken several steps to address your concerns. First and foremost, we are pleased to inform you that our parking lot, despite the rent adjustment, remains one of the most affordable options in town. We understand the importance of value for money and aim to provide you with the best possible offerings.

Moreover, we have heard your requests for improved snow and ice removal services. We are excited to announce that starting from March 1, our trusted partner, Acme Company, will be responsible for clearing the lot promptly by 7 a.m, ensuring safe and accessible parking during winter weather conditions.

Additionally, we understand the frustration caused by unauthorized vehicles occupying your rented space. To tackle this issue, we will be installing highly visible signs by March 1, clearly indicating that all spaces are rented. This will enable us to promptly tow any vehicles parked improperly, ensuring that your designated space is consistently available for your convenience.

As a token of our appreciation for your continued trust and support, we have enclosed a new parking sticker for you to display on your rearview mirror. This will help our parking attendants quickly identify your vehicle.

We value your tenancy and always strive to provide excellent service. If you have any questions or require further assistance, please do not hesitate to reach out to our friendly team.

Thank you for choosing us as your parking solution.

Best regards,
A.E. Jackson