October 7, 2015

Homework Help: Biographical Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

Posted by Victoria on Monday, April 7, 2014 at 11:40am.

How much more of the wordiness should I eliminate from my essay? I desperately want to recieve an excellent grade for this assignment, but I can't if you refuse to read any more of my revisions. I don't want to bother you or make you upset, but I still need your help.

Should I remove all excessive adjectives from the second and third paragraphs? I know you already evaluated the second paragraph, but I don't know whether you thought it required more editing. Also, I don't know your thoughts about the third paragraph.

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