"That is what I did to make my difference."
That's what I put for my body closing sentence and my teacher considers it lame.
How could I improve it?
English - Writeacher, Sunday, March 16, 2014 at 2:23pm
It is lame. It's undoubtedly repetitive if you have spent your paper telling how you have contributed your time to make your community better.
However, without seeing your whole paper, it's very hard to tell.