posted by Anonymous .
Thesis: My favorite thing to do is listen to music.
Cool Closing Sentence: "Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching, love like you'll never get hurt and live like it's heaven on Earth"
I need help on my transition sentence. Should it be; I love music ?
It could be.
It's impossible to judge without seeing the entire essay.
When writing an essay make sure that you do not use the word I a lot so that your paper keeps the attention of your audience.
"Sing like no one is listening, dance like no one is watching..."
Isn't that a quotation from someone? Mark Twain maybe?
DO NOT PLAGIARIZE!
I looked for the author and only found "anonymous."