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Homework Help: Essay Evaluation (Writeacher)

Posted by Anonymous on Monday, February 17, 2014 at 8:26pm.

What do you think about what I have written as an introduction? Dpes it require improvisation or revision? What do you suggest?

What I have been assigned to write: "In Amy's Tan's "Rules of the Game," we read about generational tug of war. Write an essay in which you discuss the motivation of each generation."

My thesis: "Both Waverly, the young chess prodigy, and her mother, a traditional Chinese woman, contribute to the conflict that is impacting their relationship."

What I have written: "In Tan’s “Rules of the Game,” we read about both generational and cultural conflicts between a mother and her daughter. Like many children and their parents, it is common to experience these conflicts between those of past and present generations. We have diverse perspectives, different means of thinking; it’s no wonder why people of our generation so often clash with those of past ones. Nevertheless, such conflicts are caused not only by one stubborn person who refuses to understand, but on both parts. Thus, both Waverly, the young chess prodigy, and her mother, a traditional Chinese woman, contribute to the conflict that is impacting their relationship."

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