Rewrite this paragraph adding or correcting the placement of hyphens, dashes, and parentheses as needed.

Some fashion designers you may be able to think of some design clothes that are casual, yet elegant. Many designers have perfumes do you wear perfume? as well as clothes. My favorite designer is a leader of haute couture (high fashion. One famous designer got his start designing ties. It usually takes years to get a famous name if a designer is lucky, his or her name became famous with a few years of entering the fashion business.

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First of all, go through and delete all the unnecessary words ... but don't delete words that take away from the basic meaning.

Once you have taken out all the unnecessary words, you'll know where to place punctuation if you decide to put them back in.

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Some fashion designers - you may be able to think of some - design clothes that are casual yet elegant. Many designers have perfumes - do you wear perfume? - as well as clothes. My favorite designer is a leader of haute couture (high fashion). One famous designer got his start designing ties. It usually takes years to get a famous name. If a designer is lucky, his or her name became famous within a few years of entering the fashion business.