can someone help take out the fragments

Most Americans take the humble hamburger for granted. In actuality, it has a long and interesting history. The burger originated in Russia during the Middle Ages. When a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them. Later they gave this new delicacy to some German sailors. Who had sailed into Baltic ports. After leaving these ports with the recipe. The sailors introduced the raw meat mixture to the people of Hamburg, Germany. Because these people did not like raw meat. They broiled the shredded meat patty.

These are the fragments.

When a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them.

Because these people did not like raw meat.

re(ms.sue) so how would i correct the paragraph?

I missed a couple of fragments.

Who had sailed into Baltic ports.

After leaving these ports with the recipe.

One way to fix the paragraph is to join a fragment with a complete sentence.

Example:

The burger originated in Russia during the Middle Ages when a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them.

Sure! Here's the corrected paragraph:

Most Americans take the humble hamburger for granted, but it has a long and interesting history. The burger actually originated in Russia during the Middle Ages when a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them. Later, they gave this new delicacy to some German sailors who had sailed into Baltic ports. Upon leaving these ports with the recipe, the sailors introduced the shredded meat patty to the people of Hamburg, Germany. Since these people did not enjoy raw meat, they decided to broil the shredded meat patty instead.

To help take out the fragments in the given text, we need to identify the incomplete sentences and rephrase them to make them grammatically correct.

1. When a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them.
- This sentence is incomplete. To fix it, we can rephrase it as: "During the Middle Ages, a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them."

2. Who had sailed into Baltic ports.
- This sentence is also incomplete, and it is a dependent clause. To fix it, we can merge it with the previous sentence: "Later, after leaving these ports with the recipe, the sailors introduced the raw meat mixture to the people of Hamburg, Germany."

By making these revisions, the paragraph becomes:

Most Americans take the humble hamburger for granted. In actuality, it has a long and interesting history. The burger originated in Russia during the Middle Ages when a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them. Later, after leaving these ports with the recipe, the sailors introduced the raw meat mixture to the people of Hamburg, Germany. Because these people did not like raw meat, they broiled the shredded meat patty.