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Connecticut College is easily my prime choice, as I believe that its exemplary academic and career opportunities will not only help me advance as a student, but also as a future professional English teacher. The college one chooses has a preeminent impact on the rest of their life, and so I have given careful thought to why Connecticut College would be a particularly perfect match for me. I believe that the available majors will accord me multiple opportunities to academically excel in my intended field, as Connecticut College offers the opportunity for quality education through earning state certification in Secondary Education, along with Creative Writing English. This, clearly, is a perfect match for me. Further still, the supreme accreditation of teacher certification programs along with their stressed importance of field work through student teaching has led me to acquire an even furtherly yielding desire to attend. I anticipate on taking full advantage of academic opportunities, such as enrolling in the Holleran Center for Community Action and Public Policy, as to develop my academic skills and teaching experience. Furthermore, I believe that I would be an excellent attribute to its community, and that it would be beneficial to me also. I thrive in the presence of challenging opportunities to grow, and so I believe that the rigorous and competitive teacher preparation courses would be a correlate match for me. In turn, I am fully confident that I will thrive academically while also becoming actively involved in campus

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