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Homework Help: English

Posted by Sara on Tuesday, September 24, 2013 at 8:31am.

Please track the errors by editing this passage of writing. This is an exercise for my English homework. I have made a couple of changes or editing to the writing piece already, but I am not sure if there are more editing that needs to be made. Also, please evaluate the writing, grammar, style as well as content for this piece. Thanks!

**The brackets indicate the changes that I have made**.

Writing Piece:

People take out oil from the sands in AB so we can drive and leave taleings(tailing) ponds. This caused a lot of damage to the land and negative impacts to wildlife. Natives get sick from eating to (too) many fish from mercury and air pollution is another big problem. Oil spills get in(into) the water, and the soil and then the fish. Toxicity assessment of oil sands process-affected (process affected) water using fish cell lines. We should stop poluting (polluting) because it is bad for the environment.

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