Are you optimistic? If so, list 4 or 5 reasons why? Then re-post.
yes i am but i cant think of any resaons can you give me hints
We have no idea why YOU are optimistic. I'm optimistic because I've lived nearly 80 years in good health and believe the near future will bring the same. I'm optimistic because my grandchildren are good and productive people and believe they will continue to be an asset to our family.
You see -- these are MY reasons. What are YOUR reasons?
im living for 15 years in pefect background with a good education and so are all the kids that liv around me also that my parents arent college graduates and theyve found jobs to make a affordable living with everything needed and to plan vacations and their son is going to highschool to get an education
Good ideas. :-)
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Im living for 15 years in perfect background and with a good education and so are all the kids that live around me. Another reason my parents aren't college graduates and they've found jobs to make an affordable living with everything needed for themselves,for me,and to plan a good vacation once a year. Something else is that someone like them that their son is in high school and getting an education which will help our nations future because this will get the more uneducated kids on with high level jobs which improve our country deeply.
I've been living for 15 years in a perfect background and a good education. All the kids that live around me have the same advantages. Another reason I'm optimistic is that although my parents are college graduates, they've found jobs to make an living. Our family has everything we need and a good vacation once a year.
You can finish the rest, making sure you have no run on sentences and that it makes sense. Please read it slowly aloud to someone else, or have them read it to you.
i need to write this as a essay can you help me split up the ideas into paragraph and the opening and conclusion