Again sorry about that in this section it says "You must complete the statement below regarding your interpretation of the responsibilities of the office for which you are candidate of. This statement must be turned in at the election meeting." and I gives us a few lines to right down a paragraph in it I want to put
"I am running for student council treasurer as a devoted, trustworthy, and responsible person. I feel I am qualified for this job because I know how to budget and handle money. In fact, my dad is his own manager and most of the time I help him manage the money that he is constantly dealing around with, so I feel that I can use the knowledge that he has taught me in dealing with money to make our budget work. I would be an efficient and effective treasurer for our student council. I am grateful for this great opportunity to be running for student body treasurer and am looking forward to the possibility of serving you."
The problem is This paragraph is all over the place and nothing seems right if you can please help me thanks
You didn't answer the question.
What is " your interpretation of the responsibilities of the office "?
Like the things they do? correct?
Correct.
What qualities does the treasurer need?
They have to be trustworthy and responsible. Also, they should be good at math.
In other words, Excellent math skills, Honest and trusted
Right. Treasurers need to be very accurate and very detail oriented.
What do you think about this?
"Treasurers need to be very accurate when working with money and very detail oriented. They have to be trustworthy and responsible. Also, they should excellent in math. They can decide on things that work towards the budget of the class they are in. They have to keep track of things that effect it as well, such as fundraiser money, or how much was spent on certain items."
That's good. However, you mean "affect" rather than "effect."
To improve your paragraph and make it more coherent, let's start by organizing your thoughts and restructuring the content. Here's a revised version:
"As a candidate for student council treasurer, I am committed to being a dedicated, trustworthy, and responsible individual. My qualifications for this role stem from my experience in managing budgets and handling money. I have gained valuable knowledge through assisting my father, who is self-employed and deals with financial matters on a regular basis. This firsthand experience has equipped me with the necessary skills to effectively manage our student council's finances. With a focus on efficiency and effectiveness, I am confident in my ability to fulfill the duties of treasurer. I am truly grateful for the opportunity to run for student body treasurer and eagerly anticipate the possibility of serving you."
This revised version maintains the original content but presents it in a more organized and coherent manner. It highlights your relevant experiences and emphasizes your commitment to the position you are seeking.