"I'm sorry," her voice was broken by her tears, "I'm so, so sorry!"
Is that line written properly, or would you write it like [ "I'm sorry." Her voice was broken by her tears. "I'm so, so sorry!"]
The first is incorrect.
The second is correct.
Is that line written properly, or would you write it like [ "I'm sorry." Her voice was broken by her tears. "I'm so, so sorry!"]
The second is correct.