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Homework Help: college essay

Posted by chhristine on Saturday, September 7, 2013 at 5:41am.

Im writing a college essay and Im not sure how to edit the first paragraph

My existence thus far has been a musical performance. The world is my stage, the platform on which I can express myself creatively. My life is the reputable melody that I play from my guitar, and the notes are my memories and life experiences. As life fluctuates and changes, so do the melodies that I procreate. My cherished sentimental memories are like reprises, essential to my song by telling me that itís okay to look back and start over, and the more difficult memories are like codas, telling me that sometimes it is necessary to let go and not look back. My life song isn't always perfect, but is the result of my constant hard work and the interminable dedication of my discipline.

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