posted by Anonymous .
This is regarding to the previous essay (the contradicting myself one).
How am I contradicting myself?
I am saying that memory is not central because it causes a person to reflect on the misery which is not good. This is the negative side of remembering the past .
You need to start over with that topic ... choose an angle and stick with it.
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