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Homework Help: Business Communications - English 101

Posted by marybeth on Tuesday, July 30, 2013 at 1:59pm.

below is a letter we must highlight and correct. It has 14 errors. Could you please review?? I wasn't certain if I should put enclosure(s).




Date


Mr. Daniel G. Sothern
674 Dunstan Street
Dallas, TX zip

Dear Mr. Sothern

Our client, Sidney Moss, executor for the Estate of Charles R. Veck, recently assigned Mr. Joseph Bonadonna, a foreign rights specialist, to act as the Estate's foreign sales representative in England and Europe. Mr. Bonadonna has extensive experience in foreign rights sales and is well known to Light and Sons, Publishers, Ltd, in London, the firm that has reprinted in England all of Charles Veck's western and science fiction novels.

We anticipate that Mr. Bonadonna will be able to make sales for most, if not all, of the carry-ons and pastiches based on Charles Veck's novels and characters, including your missing last part of the sentence.

The Estate's percentage from any sales of carry-on and pastiche novels written by writers-for-hire will be 17 %, similar to other foreign rights agreements we have negotiated in the past.

This agreement is separate and apart from the domestic sales agreement clause in your contract with New Lion, which has published your Veck carry-ons and pastiches in the united states.

If you are in agreement with the foregoing, would you kindly sign and date one of these copies and return it to me as soon as possible. Thank you.

Sincerely, ____________________ DANIEL G. SOTHERN


______________________
Marvin Gold
Attorney- at- Law

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