posted by sara on .
can you plz correct it
Howdy comrades! Shouldn’t surprise anyone that we took a beating this year, given the insane pricing moves our knucklehead competitors have been making. I mean how those clowns can keep turning a profit is beyond me, what with steel costs still going through the roof and labour costs heating up – even in countries where everybody goes to find cheap labour – and hazardous waste disposal regs adding to operating costs too.
What is the purpose of this note?
Who is the audience?
What does the writer want the reader to do?
would you please rephrase it?
my boss has given me to rewrite it for international employees.
i want it to have in simple english so that every body can understand