can you plz correct it
Howdy comrades! Shouldn’t surprise anyone that we took a beating this year, given the insane pricing moves our knucklehead competitors have been making. I mean how those clowns can keep turning a profit is beyond me, what with steel costs still going through the roof and labour costs heating up – even in countries where everybody goes to find cheap labour – and hazardous waste disposal regs adding to operating costs too.
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would you please rephrase it?
my boss has given me to rewrite it for international employees.
i want it to have in simple english so that every body can understand
Sure! Here's the corrected version:
Hello, comrades! It shouldn't come as a surprise that we have faced significant challenges this year, primarily due to the exorbitant pricing strategies adopted by our competitors. It's baffling to me how those individuals are managing to maintain profitability. Factors such as skyrocketing steel prices, rising labor costs (even in countries known for cheap labor), and the additional expenses of complying with hazardous waste disposal regulations have contributed to our operating costs.
Sure! Here's the corrected version:
Hello comrades! It shouldn't come as a surprise that we faced significant challenges this year, considering the unreasonable pricing strategies adopted by our competitors. I can't fathom how those individuals are able to maintain profitability when steel prices continue to skyrocket, labor costs are increasing (even in countries typically known for cheap labor), and operational costs are further burdened by strict hazardous waste disposal regulations.