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December 17, 2014

Homework Help: Writing

Posted by Anonymous on Sunday, June 30, 2013 at 3:23pm.

My corrections (please check grammar...etc):

As I reflected back I realized that my friends got better grades than me.

...better grades than me... What is wrong with this?

...seek for help... What is wrong with this?

... it instead learns... What is wrong with this?

Literally, it does not learn... --> It does not learn literally...

The hare never fails which means it never learns. Yet when it fails... (Do you see the contradiction here?)
Oops!!!!!

Not only failure is...--> This is not parallel to "it allows..." , right?

key ingredient- failure A dash should be used,correct?

...deeper in to learning. What is wrong?

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