posted by tina !!! help me please .
please give me some outlines on this topic - the government has granted a large amount of money to your school to build a hobby room and buy instruments for the school orchestra . why would you like to have the two in your school.
please explain a few lines on this topic please.
No one knows what YOU think about having these things in YOUR school, but here are some general organization ideas:
1st paragraph: Introduction, including thesis statement <~~write this paragraph AFTER writing the middle paragraphs
2nd: hobby room -- 6 sentences about what's in a hobby room and why it would be good for students in your school
3rd: orchestra instruments -- 6 sentences about which instruments are needed and why a full orchestra would be good for your school
4th: conclusion <~~write this after all the others are complete
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