revise the following sentences to eliminate shifts in tense, mood, voice or person.
7. The flight attendant said, "please turn off all electronic devices," but that we could use them again after takeoff.
8. The real estate market was was softer than it has been for a decade, and a buyer could practically name their price.
9. When in Florence, be sure to see the city's famed cathedral, and many tourists also visit Michelangelo's statue David.
10. The freezing weather is threatening crops such as citrus fruits, which were sensitive to cold.
english - Writeacher, Sunday, May 19, 2013 at 10:57pm
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english - Anonymous, Sunday, July 21, 2013 at 12:59pm
The freezing weather is threatening crops such as citrus fruits, that are sensitive to the cold.