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posted by Nancy on .
Discuss the society in Brave New World as a utopia.
What should i make my thesis be???
Please help im so lost. It is a utopia
•English - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, April 16, 2013 at 1:14pm
I think a good thesis would be:
Brave New World reflects a dystopia, not a utopia.
•English - Nancy, Tuesday, April 16, 2013 at 7:21pm
But it says.. discuss the society in Brave new world as a utopia. So don't you think the thesis should be more detailed and well structured.
Not necessarily. The body of your paper should set forth at least three arguments supporting your thesis.
Check the website about thesis statements that I posted for you.
Have you checked the definitions of utopia and dystopia?
yes I understand that, I checked the sites out and they say first step is to pick up a topic, which in this case is what I don't understand, then ask a question regarding the topic than answer the question and finally reword the answer. So can u plzzzz help me with the intro.. So far I have:
Imagine what a perfect society would be like? Everyone would be happy. No war, no fights. This is exactly how the society in Brave New World is portrayed by Aldous Huxley. Although the novel itself is dystopian, the society in it is shown as a utopian society. This book written by Aldous Huxley concentrates on the development of mankind in a future society.
Please help me figure out the best thesis and the best arguments:( Please ms.sue....I desperately need ur help.
This a good thesis.
"Although the novel itself is dystopian, the society in it is shown as a utopian society. "
Now you need at least three good reasons why it's utopian rather than dystopian. You'll explain these in the body of your paper.
It can be a utopia since each individual is happy..right?
But that is only one can u help me wid the other 2? and putting it all in a sentence...
Ms.Sue!!! This is worth 15% it is a summative:( My life stinks...I need ur guidance..
Doesn't the planned economy seem to make it a utopia? No one is poor. No one thinks he or she is discriminated against. What other advantages do yu see?
hmm.. well I don't know I cant think of any more...at the end how do I put it into a level 4 sentence including what I will be writing about in the body:(