Tuesday
March 31, 2015

Homework Help: Writing

Posted by Blaze on Tuesday, April 9, 2013 at 9:06am.

for this profile story i'm doing one of my sentences was

Originally from central Indiana, Gilbert did not grow up in a diverse neighborhood, nor did she attend a diverse school system.
My teacher told me to elaborate on when I say diverse..

Is this better?
Growing up in central Indiana, Gilbert was not exposed too much diversity. She lived in a predominately white middle class neighborhood, and attended a white middle class school system.
How could I fix it?

Answer this Question

First Name:
School Subject:
Answer:

Related Questions

human resources - What are the pros and cons of having a more diverse workforce...
English - Could you help with the punctuation on this paragraph please! ...
american education - identify the rights and responsibilities you will have as a...
Early childhood - School-age children generally develop writing skills in which ...
Geography (Ms. Sue) - 1). In what way does Western Europe have a diverse economy...
English - Please help with this whole paragraph I rewrote it and thank you Ms ...
education - Steps required for a multicultural education to be effective. ...
geography - how has the geography and history of the South helped create a ...
Geography - How has the geography and history of the South helped to create a ...
college - I need help with writing a thesis statement for a paper on ...

Members