posted by Sarah on .
how can i reword this sentence differently and better?
it sounds wrong to me.
In conclusion, The Scarlet Letter is a transcendentalist novel of the strength of individual character.
It doesn't make sense to me. In every day words, what do you want to say?
i want to say that the novel is a transcendentalist story of the strength of individual character
The Scarlet Letter is a transcendentalist novel about the strength of a woman's character.
If you use "about" instead of "of" your sentence will read better.
It's still pretty hazy, but a bit better.
Aha! Ms. Sue got it!!
thank you both! :)