Homework Help: Language Arts

Posted by Brandi on Tuesday, March 12, 2013 at 5:13pm.

Not sure between 2 answers on the question below.
What is the BEST way to write this sentence correctly?
"David went to the store and bought some bread then he took the long way home."

a. David went to the store and bought some bread. Then he took the long way home.
b. David went to the store and bought some bread, then he took the long way home.
Thanks..

Language Arts - Writeacher, Tuesday, March 12, 2013 at 5:19pm
B is incorrect. It's a run-on.

A is already correct; B would be correct with a semicolon in place of the comma.

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