Posted by Laruen on Sunday, February 10, 2013 at 7:06pm.
You shouldn't introduce any new ideas in an introduction. Have you mentioned anything in the body of your paper about what today's African-Americans want?
Or, I suppose you could use your last sentence to bring this discussion up to date. You could say --
Today African Americans still want equity and fairness under the law.
this is my CONCLUSION paragraph
Sorry, but I meant conclusion, not introduction.
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