Imagine that you are an agent who is interested in publishing new authors. Choose any book you like and present the book to a publisher in New York. You want to be the person responsible for putting the book on the shelf. You should convince the publisher that the book is well worthy and will do well once it is published. Use persuasive language and details from the book to prove your point.
I need some more ideas please?
That's what I have so far.
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To whom it may concern,
I recently discovered that the book "Fallen, by Lauren Kate". Fallen is a series. Lauren wrote the book very well. As I read I felt as if I was there in the book too. It felt like I was watching a movie.
Teenagers will love this book! It has romance, and every girl loves romance. I love this book. I am a big fan of romance and sure enough when I first read it I fell in love. The book came alive as you read it, and you could feel the main characters feelings.
I recently discovered that the book Fallen, by Lauren Kate. Fallen is a series.<~~How can it be both a book AND a series?? Lauren wrote the book very well.<~~What do you mean by "very well"? Be specific. As I read I felt as if I was there in the book too. It felt like<~~wrong word I was watching a movie. <~~How did the author accomplish this?
Teenagers will love this book! <~~ALL teenagers? That's quite a generalization! How do you know this? It has romance, and every girl loves romance.<~~OOO, now THERE'S another sweeping generalization if I ever saw one! How do you know that "every girl" loves romance? I love this book. I am a big fan of romance and sure enough when I first read it I fell in love.b><~~Fell in love with what? The book came alive as you<~~Me? I haven't read it! read it, and you<~~Me?? could feel the main characters<~~wrong word feelings.<~~How did the author accomplish this?
Is "Fallen" a book or a series?
What did Kate do that made you say it was written well?
Does every girl love romance? Really?
Why did you fall in love? What specifically caused this hormonal reaction?
In the last sentence -- I haven't read it. Get rid of "you."
You need to be more specific about what in this book (series?) will draw readers to it?
Stupid! -__-Yeah thanks for helping all you guys were doing was being mean! -__-
Neither of us was being mean. If you work on answering the questions each of us asked, you'll be able to clarify and expand on your write-up.
Mostly you need to include details and examples of the general statements you made. Once you do that, feel free to re-post if you'd like someone to read over your work before you submit it. Just make sure you don't take offense when all we are trying to do is help you see what's missing.
Dear Publisher,
I am writing to bring your attention to a truly captivating book that I believe will be a great addition to your shelves. The book I am referring to is "Fallen" by Lauren Kate, a brilliantly written novel that has the power to transport readers into a mesmerizing world of romance and fantasy.
One of the key strengths of "Fallen" lies in the author's exceptional storytelling ability. Lauren Kate has a unique way of immersing readers in her narrative, making them feel as if they are watching an enchanting movie unfold before their eyes. From the very first page, I was completely enthralled by the vivid descriptions, the intricate plot, and the depth of the characters.
This book particularly targets teenagers, a demographic that craves immersive stories and relatable characters. The romance element in "Fallen" is sure to strike a chord with young readers, as it taps into their longing for true love, passion, and heartache. Lauren Kate masterfully weaves a tale of forbidden love, intense emotions, and self-discovery, creating a storyline that resonates with the teenage audience on a profound level.
Moreover, the book's ability to evoke powerful emotions is truly remarkable. As I read "Fallen," I couldn't help but feel every emotion that the main character experienced. I laughed, cried, and felt my heart race as I turned the pages, completely engrossed in the narrative. The emotional connection readers form with the characters is a testament to the author's skill in creating well-rounded and relatable protagonists.
In addition to its captivating story and well-developed characters, "Fallen" also offers a richly imagined world filled with mysteries and secrets. The author masterfully builds an atmosphere of intrigue and anticipation, keeping readers on the edge of their seats as they unravel the puzzles that lie within the pages. This sense of discovery and the promise of revelation are sure to keep readers engaged and eagerly turning each page.
To conclude, "Fallen" by Lauren Kate is not just another book - it is a literary masterpiece that has the potential to captivate readers and become a beloved addition to your bookstore. Its enthralling storyline, relatable characters, and emotional depth make it a must-read for teenagers and fans of romance alike. I wholeheartedly believe that publishing this book will be a wise investment, as it is destined to be a classic and a bestseller.
Thank you for considering "Fallen" for publication. I am confident that this exceptional novel will exceed all expectations and find a place of honor on your shelves.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]