Homework Help: English

Posted by Anonymous on Monday, January 21, 2013 at 6:11pm.

How would you reword this sentence to make it easier to understand?

In other words, giving up results in goals much harder to achieve, thus persevering really makes a difference.

English - Writeacher, Monday, January 21, 2013 at 6:31pm
First of all, it's not a complete sentence without a main verb.

Next, try something like this:

It's better to ... than to ...
English - Anonymous, Monday, January 21, 2013 at 6:33pm
I can't use contractions or "to be" verbs in my essays.
English - Ms. Sue, Monday, January 21, 2013 at 7:31pm
I don't understand what you're trying to say in that sentence.

Persevering brings more satisfaction than giving up your goals.

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