ENGLISH PLEASE HELP!!! URGENT!!!
posted by Corie on .
The Lantern Festival is a unique Chinese cultural tradition that includes aspects such as fancy lanterns, watching the Lion Dance, and eating tangyuan.
I wrote this thesis statement at the beginning of a paper I wrote about the Chinese Lantern Festival. but I have to restate it in my conclusion, and for some reason I cant think f one that sounds good. please help me out here, its not hard I just cant seem to think of one.
#1, it's not much of a thesis statement. What is YOUR OPINION (your position, your stance) about this topic?
#2, add your opinion, and you shouldn't have a hard time rephrasing it.
I think its a unique tradition that brings together a lot of Chinese culture.
And my high school English teacher said it was a good thesis statement.
Revise your main idea sentence so it includes your opinion. Re-post when you're ready.