Posted by Corie on Saturday, December 29, 2012 at 7:43pm.
#1, it's not much of a thesis statement. What is YOUR OPINION (your position, your stance) about this topic?
#2, add your opinion, and you shouldn't have a hard time rephrasing it.
I think its a unique tradition that brings together a lot of Chinese culture.
And my high school English teacher said it was a good thesis statement.
Revise your main idea sentence so it includes your opinion. Re-post when you're ready.
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