Posted by ANONYMOUS on Tuesday, December 25, 2012 at 3:44pm.
Only YOU know what your thesis can say because ONLY YOU know what YOUR opinion about this topic is.
Read this about thesis statements, and then post what YOU THINK:
Your thesis statement must include factual information (which you might already have) plus your own position/opinion/stance. Without your position on the topic, it isn't a true thesis statement. So think of this sentence as the angle you want to take on the topic and what you intend to prove by the end of your paper. (If your statement is simply factual, then there's nothing to prove!)
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
This is one of the very best places I've seen online to help students write good thesis statements. It shows you sentences that aren't thesis statements and how to turn each one into real thesis statements.
http://blog.eduify.com/index.php/2009/06/21/5-tips-on-how-to-write-a-strong-thesis-statement/
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