posted by Ted on .
I have difficulty restating my thesis in a different way in my conclusion.
my thesis: Ruby's sense of responsibility becomes her weaknesses as it makes her blind to the fact that her decision to stay with a man that maltreats her is wrong. For this, she develops a habit of smoking which leads to her downfall.
i have tried to restate this thesis but it didn't work.
Well, first off, I don't think that's a thesis statement. It's all factual (what happened in the story, right?), with no insight or opinion of your own.
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