The following items are run-on sentences. Revise each item either by making two complete sentences, or by adding a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Change the punctuation and capitalization as necessary. Make all corrections on the sentences below.
I was angry when Jonah crashed my car, I didn't visit him in the hospital until the next day.
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To revise the run-on sentence, we can either make two complete sentences or add a conjunctive adverb or semicolon. Let's make two complete sentences:
I was angry when Jonah crashed my car. I didn't visit him in the hospital until the next day.